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The rout of producing electricity with help of geothermal power was illustrated below which has two major step: the first

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The rout of producing electricity with help of geothermal power was illustrated below which has two major step: the first one is convert water to steam and the second one is producing electricity by steam. At the first step, water was transferred approximately 4. 5 Km in the depths of the earth, close to geothermal zone and hot rocks. At the second step, because of better heat transfer, pipes containing water become narrow. Hence, remarkable heat of rocks leads to significant ascend in water temperature. In the steps 3 and 4, Hot water was pumped up to a condenser and huge amount of steam which is both high temperature and full of pressure was produced. Then, the pressure of steam rotates turbines that were connected by a shaft to a generator. In the last step, generator produce electricity which is ready for transferring to consumers. To sum up, geothermal method for producing electricity is a powerful way for producing electricity that not only is Eco-friendly method, but also do not need fossil fuel.
The rout of producing
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electricity
with
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help
of geothermal power
was illustrated
below which has two major
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step
: the
first
one is convert
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water
to steam and the second one is producing
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electricity
by steam.

At the
first
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step
,
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water
was transferred
approximately 4. 5 Km in the depths of the earth, close to geothermal zone and hot rocks. At the second
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step
,
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because
of better heat transfer, pipes containing
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water
become narrow.
Hence
, remarkable heat of rocks leads to significant ascend in
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water
temperature.

In the
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steps
3 and 4, Hot
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water
was pumped
up to a condenser and huge amount of steam which is both high temperature and full of pressure
was produced
. Then, the pressure of steam rotates turbines that
were connected
by a shaft to a generator. In the last
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step
, generator produce
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electricity
which is ready for transferring to consumers.

To sum up, geothermal method for producing
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electricity
is a powerful way for producing
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electricity
that not
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only
is Eco-friendly method,
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but
also
do not need fossil fuel.
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IELTS essay The rout of producing electricity with help of geothermal power was illustrated below which has two major step: the first

Essay
  American English
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173 words
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