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THE ROLE OF TRADITIONAL MEDIA AND THE SOCIAL MEDIA IN THE DEVELOPED WORLD

THE ROLE OF TRADITIONAL MEDIA AND THE SOCIAL MEDIA IN THE DEVELOPED WORLD 26wLb
An interesting point to think is about the role of the traditional and social media in the develop world that we are living now. In the last 2 decades have been huge changes in the way of how to advice a product to be sold to its client. And that huge change is because Internet appear to be used by the population around the world. Internet bring with it the development of social media and a change for traditional media. However the role of the traditional media or social media continue to be to communicate and generate trust in its public, generate more effective communication strategies and more accesible to the public. Whereas traditional media still have credibility, the social media posts have to be viewed carefully. Why? Because traditional media publications are created by journalist that dedicated to research and using reliable sources whereas social media posts can be created by anyone on the networks.
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world that we are living
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because
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used
by the population around the world. Internet
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with it the development of
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and a
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the role of the
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or
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continue to be to communicate and generate trust in its public, generate more effective communication strategies and more
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accesible
to the public.

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still
have credibility, the
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posts
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have to
be viewed
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. Why?
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publications
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social
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posts can
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IELTS essay THE ROLE OF TRADITIONAL MEDIA AND THE SOCIAL MEDIA IN THE DEVELOPED WORLD

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156 words
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