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The role of traditional media and social media in the developed world

The role of traditional media and social media in the developed world 7W8XA
The social media and traditional media have always been a very important tool for us to be informed. Through the years we have become more demanding as consumers because of the evolution in the world. Nowadays, we can verify how good is a product that we want to buy, with just a click, and see all the comments based on other people´s experiences. This essay will demonstrate which role is more important, Traditional media or social media and why. Firstly, it is important to know the differences between Social Media and Traditional Media. Traditional Media are the advertising channels that have been used for decades, for example, television, newspaper, radio, and billboards. On the other side, Social Media are the digital channels, for example, apps and banner ads, this in comparison to Traditional Media have been more used in the last 2 decades. According to Shah (2020), “The battle between traditional and new media has raged on for the past several years, with both having their pos and cons”. Social Media has changed all the marketing that businesses used to do, nowadays, through it you can filter your ideal buyer, knows their hobbies and the most important that they see and share your product. Traditional Media do not have these advantages; besides that, it is very expensive make advertising with them, also they do not filter their audience so you cannot really analyze your data. “Social media marketing uses content to cultivate trust over time. Traditional marketing forces an opinion on a buyer in hopes that it will take if repeated frequently enough” Rodriguez (n. d) asserted. The engagement that social media do is very important, because they have constantly relation with their costumers, with comments or messages, and with this the buyer always is going to be more comfortable about the product that he is buying. To conclude, in my opinion social media is right now the best tool that we can use as a buyers or sellers. Traditional media are still very important for some group of people that have refused to evolve with the world, but the end and with all Pandemic situation we everyday are going to be more and more involved in this new media that already have change our life.
The
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and
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have always been a
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important
tool for us to
be informed
. Through the years we have become more demanding as consumers
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because
of the evolution in the world. Nowadays, we can verify how
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good
is a product that we want to
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buy
, with
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just
a click, and
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see
all the comments based on other
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people´s
experiences. This essay will demonstrate which role is more
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,
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or
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and why.

Firstly
, it is
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important
to know the differences between
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Social
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and
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Traditional
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.
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Traditional
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are the advertising channels that have been
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used
for decades,
for example
, television, newspaper, radio, and billboards. On the other side,
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Social
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Media
are the digital channels,
for example
, apps and banner ads, this
in comparison
to
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Traditional
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have been more
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used
in the last 2 decades.

According to Shah (2020), “The battle between
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traditional
and new
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media
has raged on for the past several years, with both having their
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pos
and cons”.
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Media
has
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changed
all the marketing that businesses
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used
to do, nowadays, through
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it
you can filter your ideal
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buyer
, knows their hobbies and the most
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important
that they
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see
and share your product.
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do not have these advantages;
besides
that, it is
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very
expensive
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make
advertising with them,
also
they do not filter their audience
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so
you cannot
really
analyze your data.

“Social
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marketing
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uses
content to cultivate trust over time.
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Traditional
marketing forces an opinion on a
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buyer
in hopes that it will take if repeated
frequently
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enough
” Rodriguez (n. d) asserted. The engagement that
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do is
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,
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because
they have
constantly
relation with their costumers, with comments or messages, and with this the
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buyer
always is going to be more comfortable about the product that he is buying.

To conclude
, in my opinion
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is right
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now
the best tool that we can
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use
as a
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buyers
or sellers.
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are
still
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for
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group of
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people
that have refused to evolve with the world,
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the
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end
and with all Pandemic situation we
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are going to be more and more involved in this new
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media
that already have
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change
our life.
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IELTS essay The role of traditional media and social media in the developed world

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5 paragraphs
376 words
6.0
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