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the role of teacher in modern education

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Education is an important for everyone. If we would be successful and intelligent person, we can get a good education. Altough, we live in the age of technology, the role of teachers on this road is undeniable. Personally, I strongly agree with the idea that any technology can’t ever replace the teacher. I intend to support my views with my arguments. Firstly, It is an undeniable fact that teachers can never lose their importance. Because teachers try to explain the information to children in a shorter and more understandable language. Also, during class they can keep students focus on study matreals or their to speech. On the other hand, teachers most of the times add the personal knowledge or own experiences. All of this can lead to children's interest in learning. However, I have always believed that teachers can be an example for children. Sometimes, teachers are role models for students. Also, professional teachers can approach each student with the sensitivity they need by determining the level of children. However, teachers not only teach academic subjects but also many social skills. In addition to all this, we can get information faster because we live in the Internet age. However, not every student is able to learn this information in a systematic way. This situation makes it necessary for students to get advice from teachers. By way of conclusion, according to the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that there is still a need for teacher activities in education. at the same time, students can listen to the advice of the teacher and get new information via the internet and express their opinions.
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for everyone. If we
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a
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good
education.
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, we
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live
in the age of technology, the role of
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teachers
on this road is undeniable.
Personally
, I
strongly
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agree
with the
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idea
that any technology can’t ever replace the
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teacher
. I intend to support my views with my arguments.

Firstly
, It is an undeniable fact that
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teachers
can never lose their importance.
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Because
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teachers
try to
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explain
the
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information
to children in a shorter and more understandable language.
Also
, during
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class
they can
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keep
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students
focus on study
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matreals
or their to speech.
On the other hand
,
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teachers
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most of the times
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add
the personal knowledge or
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own
experiences. All of this can lead to children's interest in learning.

However
, I have always believed that
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teachers
can be an example for children.
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Sometimes
,
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teachers
are role models for
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students
.
Also
, professional
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teachers
can approach each
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student
with the sensitivity they need by determining the level of children.
However
,
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teachers
not
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teach academic subjects
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social
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skills
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In addition
to all this, we can
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get
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faster
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because
we
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live
in the Internet age.
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, not every
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student
is able to learn this
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information
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in a systematic way
. This situation
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it necessary for
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students
to
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get
advice from teachers.

By way of conclusion, according to the arguments and examples
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given
I
firmly
believe that there is
still
a need for
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teacher
activities in education.
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at
the same time,
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students
can listen to the advice of the
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teacher
and
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get
new
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information
via the internet and express their opinions.
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IELTS essay the role of teacher in modern education

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
273 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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