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The flowchart illustrates how a commercial laundry service works. There are nine or ten steps involved in handling laundry, and the number of steps depends on the type of laundry.

The flowchart illustrates how a commercial laundry service works. There are nine or ten steps involved in handling laundry, and the number of steps depends on the type of laundry. Jlyka
The flowchart illustrates how a commercial laundry service works. There are nine or ten steps involved in handling laundry, and the number of steps depends on the type of laundry. Overall, the entire process is very similar for the two types of laundry. The only step that differs relates to the level of dryness of the laundered fabric. After laundry is collected from suppliers, it is separated into towels and linen. Each type of laundry is loaded into laundry bags, which are then transported and loaded into a laundry machine. Following that, the washing cycle begins, and it takes two hours from start to finish. After washing, water is partially drained from the laundry by pressing, and the next stage is different for towels and linen. Towels are dried completely, whereas linen is only partially dried. The half-wet linen is then ironed. In the final step, laundry, including both towels and linen, is transported to the folding machine.
The flowchart illustrates how a commercial
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laundry
service works. There are nine or ten
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steps
involved in handling
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laundry
, and the number of
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steps
depends on the type of laundry.

Overall
, the entire process is
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very
similar for the two types of
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laundry
. The
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only
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step
that differs relates to the level of dryness of the laundered fabric.

After
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laundry
is collected
from suppliers, it
is separated
into
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towels
and
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linen
. Each type of
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laundry
is loaded
into
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laundry
bags, which are then transported and loaded into a
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laundry
machine. Following that, the washing cycle
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begins
, and it takes two hours from
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start
to finish. After washing, water is
partially
drained from the
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laundry
by pressing, and the
next
stage is
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different
for
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towels
and
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linen
.
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Towels
are dried
completely, whereas
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linen
is
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only
partially
dried. The half-wet
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linen
is then ironed. In the final
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step
,
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laundry
, including both
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towels
and
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linen
,
is transported
to the folding machine.
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IELTS essay The flowchart illustrates how a commercial laundry service works. There are nine or ten steps involved in handling laundry, and the number of steps depends on the type of laundry.

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