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the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? Provide Solution for this.

the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? Provide Solution for this. 8J00G

Everybody is working hard, some people doing for their family so that they can provide three times of food to them and other those who can live standard of living. I will discuss the problems and provide some gel to cure the disease of poor people becoming more poorer. The first reason for why low income people cannot increase their status is because of they are not having enough literacy qualifications degree. In order to gain sustainable income, they need to work in a reputable company whereas it is not a option for them since a big company require a worker with certain degree of education. Another important reason is, although there are alot of informal job opportunities, these kinds of jobs mostly require a skilled workforce. For instance, mechanic knowledge is needed to become a motor eng in any repair motor workshop. These are the two main reasons why individuals are hard to be free from poverty. In oder to be able to tackle the issue related to the low level of education among the poor, the government can encourage them to raise their formal knowledge by making a free academy. Unless, they have acess to school without making a payment. They would not try to increase their knowledge capabilities. Since they have more pressuring matters than education. For unskilled individuals, authorities can overcome this issue by holding numerous free training programs exclusively for low society communities. once they are equipped with any specific skill, they will be exposed to more job opportunities.

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hard
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 doing for their family This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they can provide three times of food to them and other those who can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 standard of living. I will discuss the problems and provide This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 gel to cure the disease of poor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 becoming Use only "poorer" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.poorer
more poorer
. The first
 reason for why low income This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 cannot increase their status is Probable usage error. Use "because they" instead.because they
because of they
 are not having This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 literacy qualifications degree. In order to gain sustainable income, they need to work in a reputable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 whereas it is not Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 option for them since a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 require a worker with certain degree of education. Another This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 reason is, although there Possible spelling mistake found.area lotare a lotare lotare plotare slotare alto
are alot
 of informal job opportunities, these kinds of jobs mostly
 require a skilled workforce. For instance
, mechanic knowledge is needed
 to become a motor Possible spelling mistake found.ENGEngendeggCNGDeng
eng
 in any repair motor workshop. These are the two main reasons why individuals are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to be free from poverty. In Possible spelling mistake found.Oderoverolderorderodorode
oder
 to be able to tackle the issue related to the low level of education among the poor, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 can encourage them to raise their formal knowledge by making a free academy. “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Unless
, they have Possible spelling mistake found.accessacesCESS
acess
 to school without making a payment. They would not try to increase their knowledge capabilities. “Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 they have more pressuring matters than education. For unskilled individuals, authorities can overcome this issue by holding numerous free training programs exclusively for low society communities. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOnce
once
 they are equipped
 with any specific This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
, they will be exposed
 to more job opportunities. 