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the rice bowl of the South Central Coast

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Phu Yen is honored as the rice bowl of the South Central Coast with the largest rice cultivation in this area. The land of "yellow flowers on green grass" also possesses a remarkable charm, bringing "senses thrilled " to many tourists during the ripe rice season. Paying a visit to Phu Yen in the harvest, you will see the whole sky covered in shiny yellow and faintly smell of ripe rice. From Ca Pass to Tuy Hoa, the two sides of the road are straight golden ripe rice, in the distance are mountains and the sound of threshing machines mingles with the sound of people are calling throbbing. The idyllic picture filled with dreams of blue sky, white clouds, golden rice paddles in the bustling atmosphere of the harvest will leave an unforgettable impression on you.
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bowl of the South Central Coast with the largest
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cultivation in this area. The land of
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yellow flowers on green grass
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senses thrilled
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tourists during the ripe
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season. Paying a visit to
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the whole sky covered in shiny yellow and
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. From Ca Pass to
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, the two sides of the road are straight golden ripe
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, in the distance are mountains and the sound of threshing machines mingles with the sound of
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people
are calling throbbing. The idyllic picture filled with dreams of blue sky, white clouds, golden
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paddles in the bustling atmosphere of the harvest will
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IELTS essay the rice bowl of the South Central Coast

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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