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the replacements of trees insted of buildings around the cities . to what wxtend do you agree or disagree with this argumen?

the replacements of trees insted of buildings around the cities. to what wxtend with this argumen? 7W23X
The importances of increasing the number of trees in exchange of apartments around the cities has been recently discussed. Altough, it is significant to take step for protecting green space, the role of houses cannot be ignored in recent days in my opinion. The structer of human's life has been transformed in retrospect however the key points of individuals lifestyle have been stabled. There are an array of variables which have impact on people's life including the cleanances of atmosphere as well as nutritions. these factores are directly connected to green environments so that it is important to protect them. By reserving green space both the essential sources of humans food and the pureness of cities atmosphere are predicted to be provide in years ahead. Take a city with resonable space of green space for instance, the trees which is located either in parks or near streets play a key role in cleaning the air. As the number of trees grow up, the air pollution will be decline so that the number of deases is going to fall down such as asmph. Moreover, the more green space will provide more sources of food where farming industry is going to encourage. As a results, both the clean air and enough food are likely to provide for people. On the other hand, recent socities have been created numerous additional needs to their life style. Not only do they need more space for living, but also the excesive number of population has been resulted in cinstructing numerous building around the cities. The more people who have been migrated to cities for either job or cure, forced governments to provide more housings in modern socities. While the space is limite, constructing buildings will restrict the green spaces. Furthermore, the cure services in roral regions have not been provided well so that the number of immigrants for requesting cure connot be restricted. In addition the governments should provide appropriate job opportunities for staff in around the huge cities so that the number of population will be dicressed. Not only the occupation should be increased in local regions, but also the curing services should be added so that the population of immigrants is pedicted to be decline. As a result, the number of buildings will be decreased in order to planting more trees. To sum up, it is important to add trees around the cities for cleaning air and enjoying foods; however, the factores such as limitaion of hospitals and jobs in local suburbs have been forced populaton to move to cities which have been influenced in increasing buildings in exchange of trees in my opinion.
The
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importances
of increasing the
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number
of
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trees
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in exchange of
apartments
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around
the
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cities
has been recently discussed.
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Altough
, it is significant to take step for protecting
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green
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space
, the role of
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houses
cannot be
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ignored
in recent days in my opinion.

The
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structer
of human's life has
been transformed
in retrospect
however
the key points of individuals lifestyle have
been stabled
. There are an
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array
of variables which have impact on
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people
's life including the
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cleanances
of atmosphere
as well
as
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nutritions
.
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these
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factores
are
directly
connected to
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green
environments
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so
that it is
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important
to protect them. By reserving
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green
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space
both the essential sources of humans
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food
and the pureness of
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cities
atmosphere
are predicted
to be
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provide
in years ahead. Take a city with
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resonable
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space
of
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green
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space
for instance
, the
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trees
which
is located
either in parks or near streets play a key role in cleaning the
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air
. As the
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number
of
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trees
grow up, the
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air
pollution will be decline
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so
that the
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number
of
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deases
is going to fall down such as
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asmph
.
Moreover
, the more
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green
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space
will
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provide
more sources of
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food
where farming industry is going to encourage. As
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a results
, both the clean
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air
and
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enough
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food
are likely to
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provide
for
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people
.

On the other hand
, recent
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socities
have
been created
numerous additional needs to their life style. Not
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only
do they need more
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space
for living,
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but
also
the
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excesive
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number
of population has
been resulted
in
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cinstructing
numerous
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building
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around
the
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cities
. The more
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people
who have
been migrated
to
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cities
for either job or cure, forced
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governments
to
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provide
more housings in modern
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socities
. While the
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space
is
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limite
, constructing
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buildings
will restrict the
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green
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spaces
.
Furthermore
, the cure services in
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roral
regions have not
been provided
well
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so
that the
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number
of immigrants for requesting cure
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connot
be restricted
. In
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addition
the
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governments
should
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provide
appropriate job opportunities for staff in
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around
the huge
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cities
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so
that the
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number
of population will be
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dicressed
. Not
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only
the occupation should
be increased
in local regions,
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but
also
the curing services should be
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added
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so
that the population of immigrants is
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pedicted
to be decline.
As a result
, the
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number
of
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buildings
will
be decreased
in order to
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planting
more trees.

To sum up, it is
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important
to
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add
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trees
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around
the
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cities
for cleaning
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air
and enjoying
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foods
;
however
, the
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factores
such as
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limitaion
of hospitals and jobs in local suburbs have
been forced
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populaton
to
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move
to
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cities
which have
been influenced
in increasing
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buildings
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in exchange of
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trees
in my opinion.
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IELTS essay the replacements of trees insted of buildings around the cities. to what wxtend with this argumen?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
440 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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