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bought something for your home

bought something for your home PM0k2

well two month ago in the huge shopping center surrounded my home i had gone for buying sofa with my husband. by the time I was looking for a sofa, I saw a bookshelf. its color was dark brown, had five floor, its height was almost two meters, so I became determined to buying that. it was too costly, but I really want to splash out. so I bought if after all. I am keen on reading book which is why I always had loved to have a bookshelf for my books. I think, if it wasn't for books, I would not have bought it.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWell
well
 two Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
 ago in the huge shopping center surrounded my home Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had gone for buying sofa with my husband. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBy
by
 the time I was looking for a sofa, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a bookshelf. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIts
its
 color was dark brown, had five floor, its height was almost two meters, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I became determined to buying that. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 was too costly, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I really
 want to splash out. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 if after all
. I am keen on reading book which is why I always had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 to have a bookshelf for my books.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
, if it wasn't for books, I would not have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it. 