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Parents are best teachers. Do you agree or disagree that parents can teach their children better than school teachers?

Parents are best teachers. that parents can teach their children better than school teachers? ndaL7
Education plays an essential role in human life. The arguments that parents can teach their childrena as traditional teachers has been in a center of great debates. Despite the importance of parental education, it is disagreed that parents can provide their children with enough knowledge as school educators. This will be illustrated by analysing that parents are unable to instruct academic subjects and they can not provide a competitive learning environment. Firstly, academic subjects require special qualification and parents lack of knowledge to clarify themes perfectly. For example, experts state that every textbook is organised in a specific way that only a specialized teacher can explain. Thus, the argument that parents have ability to educate as good as school teachers can be refuted. Secondly, parents cannot create environment for children to compete with each other because they instruct them individually. To examplify, according to some facts, competition for knowledge among children is a key factor to strengthen their erudition. It is clear that peoples try to leave behind their peers and strives to learn new things which cause to enrich their education. Therefore, this makes clear why parents are not able to teach their children as a traditional school educators. To conclude, parents lack capability to explain all subjects thoroughly and they cannot supply competitive circumstances which are needed for studying productively. Thus, it can be concluded that parents cannot substitute for traditional teachers. It is predicted that this trend will continue in the future.
Education plays an essential role in human life. The arguments that
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parents
can teach their
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childrena
as traditional
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teachers
has been in a center of great debates. Despite the importance of parental education, it
is disagreed
that
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parents
can provide their
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children
with
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enough
knowledge as school educators. This will
be illustrated
by
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analysing
that
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parents
are unable to instruct academic
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subjects and
they can not provide a competitive learning environment.

Firstly
, academic subjects require special qualification and
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parents
lack of knowledge to clarify themes
perfectly
.
For example
, experts state that every textbook is
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organised
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in a specific way
that
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only
a specialized
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teacher
can
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explain
.
Thus
, the argument that
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parents
have ability to educate as
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good
as school
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teachers
can
be refuted
.

Secondly
,
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parents
cannot create environment for
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children
to compete with each other
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because
they instruct them
individually
. To
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examplify
, according to
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some
facts, competition for knowledge among
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children
is a key factor to strengthen their erudition. It is
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clear
that peoples try to
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leave
behind their peers and strives to learn new things which cause to enrich their education.
Therefore
, this
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makes
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clear
why
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parents
are not able to teach their
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children
as a traditional school educators.

To conclude
,
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parents
lack capability to
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explain
all subjects
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thoroughly and
they cannot supply competitive circumstances which
are needed
for studying
productively
.
Thus
, it can
be concluded
that
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parents
cannot substitute for traditional
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teachers
. It
is predicted
that this trend will continue in the future.
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IELTS essay Parents are best teachers. that parents can teach their children better than school teachers?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
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