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The recycling procedure is divided mainly into five steps.

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The recycling procedure is divided mainly into five steps. In the first step, the plastic container which is having a 2m3 capacity having three holes on each side to allow the atmospheric air into the container. In the second step, the different household wastes are added to the container from the top. There are 15 cm's two layers of food, grass, and newspaper. Further, Nitrogen and hot water are added to the mixture. After this step, the container is closed with upper lead and the heat is generated after the degradation of organic material. Finally, the mixture is allowed to decompose for 6 months. In the end, it is ready to use as garden fertilizer. Nowadays, due to materialistic life and increasing competition, numerous youngsters are facing stress problems. There are various reasons for this problem and this essay will cover the solutions to manage stress problems. To begin with, stress is the word that each person is related to it. If the person is under stress, then it is the high point for attention because it leads to an increase in depression levels in a person. Both young and old age people are facing tension these days. Firstly, education and examination stress are the most common in students as well as youngsters. Secondly, there are many sectors where employees can not get a job or can not satisfied with the position, also mentally torching by seniors and raging activity in colleges leaders to develop stress and anxiety. In a married couple, the relationship complications and family problems cause depression. But on the other hand, each problem has its solution. There are various ways by which one can overcome stress and anxiety. Students have to think always in a positive way. They can read an inspirational book and follow the footprints of their idols. Furthermore, one can do the favorite activity such as painting, craftwork, dancing, singing, reading which leads to a decrease in the level of stress. Moreover, it is said by many psychologists that spending more and more time with family and friends evades anxiety and loneliness. Schools have to decrease the burden of study and make the education system less complex. To conclude, there are many ways to manage stress levels. It is necessary to take action against such depression.
The recycling procedure
is divided
mainly
into five
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steps
. In the
first
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step
, the plastic
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container
which is having a 2m3 capacity having three holes on each side to
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allow
the atmospheric air into the
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container
. In the second
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step
, the
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different
household wastes are
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added
to the
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container
from the top. There are 15
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cm's
two layers of food, grass, and newspaper.

Further
, Nitrogen and hot water are
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added
to the mixture. After this
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step
, the
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container
is closed
with upper lead and the heat
is generated
after the degradation of organic material.
Finally
, the mixture is
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allowed
to decompose for 6 months. In the
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end
, it is ready to
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use
as garden fertilizer.

Nowadays, due to materialistic life and increasing competition, numerous youngsters are facing
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stress
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problems
. There are various reasons for this
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problem
and this essay will cover the solutions to manage
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stress
problems.

To
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begin
with,
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stress
is the word that each person
is related
to it. If the person is under
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stress
, then it is the high point for attention
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because
it leads to an increase in depression levels in a person. Both young and
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old
age
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people
are facing tension these days.
Firstly
, education and examination
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stress
are the most common in students
as well
as youngsters.
Secondly
, there are
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many
sectors where employees can not
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get
a job or can not
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satisfied
with the position,
also
mentally torching by seniors and raging activity in colleges leaders to develop
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stress
and anxiety. In a married couple, the relationship complications and family
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problems
cause depression.

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But
on the other hand
, each
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problem
has its solution. There are various ways by which one can overcome
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stress
and anxiety.

Students
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have to
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think
always in a
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positive
way. They can read an inspirational book and follow the footprints of their idols.
Furthermore
, one can do the favorite activity such as painting,
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craftwork
, dancing, singing, reading which leads to a decrease in the level of
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stress
.
Moreover
, it
is said
by
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many
psychologists that spending more and more time with family and friends evades anxiety and loneliness. Schools
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have to
decrease the burden of study and
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make
the education system less complex.

To conclude
, there are
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many
ways to manage
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stress
levels. It is necessary to take action against such depression.
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IELTS essay The recycling procedure is divided mainly into five steps.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
383 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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