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The reason why we choose this topic

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- The reason why we choose this topic is because during the time of covid-19 pandemic around the world, almost all students have to study online leading to the knowledge gaps, not keeping up with lectures and increasingly leading to serious consequences such as boredom because they don’t understand the lesson. The most common reason for this is the distraction from the surrounding influence when learning online. Through the seminar “How to improve your focus and limit distraction” we hope that we can improve our concentration to the maximum in class as well as self-study ability.
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The reason why we choose this topic is
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because
during the time of
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covid-19
pandemic around the world, almost all students
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
study online leading to the knowledge gaps, not keeping up with lectures and
increasingly
leading to serious consequences such as boredom
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they don’t understand the lesson. The most common reason for this is the distraction from the surrounding influence when learning online. Through the seminar “How to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
your focus and limit distraction” we hope that we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our concentration to the maximum in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
as well
as self-study ability.

IELTS essay The reason why we choose this topic

Essay
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1 paragraphs
96 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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