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Summarise the ways in which your personal background has encouraged you to want to make an impact in your home country. You should indicate areas in which you have already contributed, such as having overcome any personal or community barriers to higher education

Summarise the ways in which your personal background has encouraged you to want to make an impact in your home country. You should indicate areas in which you have already contributed, such as having overcome any personal or community barriers to higher education 3WoVd
Construction is one of the oldest profession that began with the birth of human being in this planet. Nowadays, as the world utilizing technology, needs to be play a vital role in this area too. Today, in some part of the world still people stick to their old techniques and performing similar kind of ways at almost in every project without the implementation of new technology and upgrading working mechanism. I always in search of the innovative part in this field and this course let me interested to pay my services after achieving this postgraduate studies. This course will going to bring a lot of new strategies and ways in executing my skills to this sector. GIS that play its crucial part in almost every technology, has greater influence in the field of construction. It plays a vital role in every phase of infrastructure either it is in watershed analysis, terrain mapping and analysis or disaster management One important utilization of this course is the implementation of this tool in finding an area where we can deploy Photovoltaic Solar Panel on the roof. However unfortunate this was not done in my final thesis and we calculated area manually which pays a lot of calculation, but I belief on myself to be fully suited the position for this course and after completion of this course I can be able to write and publish my research in one of the reputed journal. Therefore it is the best way to have calculated land area which includes rooftop area and simple land area, so that in future when world completely moved to Solar Panel deployment then UK would be on the 2nd rank after USA, as they have completed their research for their whole state while Japan and other countries has just research on few specified region. I will assure you to find me optimist for this course because of not just having a theme motive of finding an area for the installation of PV Panel but also having prior knowledge of remote sensing tool. By combining my skills with this course my terminating focus is to provide simplified and effective way of construction through acquiring basic knowledge of this course.
Construction is one of the oldest profession that began with the birth of human being in this planet. Nowadays, as the world utilizing technology, needs to be play a vital role in this
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area
too.
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Today
, in
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some
part of the world
still
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people
stick to their
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old
techniques and performing similar kind of
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ways
at almost in every project without the implementation of new technology and upgrading working mechanism.

I always in search of the innovative part in this field and this
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course
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let
me interested to pay my services after achieving this postgraduate studies. This
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course
will
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going
to bring
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a lot of
new strategies and
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ways
in executing my
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skills
to this sector. GIS that play its crucial part in almost every technology, has greater influence in the field of construction. It plays a vital role in every phase of infrastructure either it is in watershed analysis, terrain mapping and analysis or disaster
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management


One
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important
utilization of this
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course
is the implementation of this tool in finding an
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area
where we can deploy Photovoltaic Solar Panel on the roof.
However
unfortunate this was not done in my final
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thesis and
we calculated
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area
manually
which pays
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a lot of
calculation,
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but
I
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belief
on myself to be
fully
suited the position for this
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course
and after completion of this
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course
I can be able to write and publish my research in one of the reputed journal.
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Therefore
it is the best
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way
to have calculated land
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area
which includes rooftop
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area
and simple land
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area
,
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so
that in future when world completely
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moved
to Solar Panel deployment then UK would be on the 2nd rank
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after USA
, as they have completed their research for their whole state while Japan and other countries has
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just
research on few specified region.

I will assure you to find me optimist for this
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course
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because
of not
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just
having a theme motive of finding an
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area
for the installation of PV Panel
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but
also
having prior knowledge of remote sensing tool. By combining my
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skills
with this
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course
my terminating focus is to provide simplified and effective
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way
of construction through acquiring basic knowledge of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
.
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IELTS essay Summarise the ways in which your personal background has encouraged you to want to make an impact in your home country. You should indicate areas in which you have already contributed, such as having overcome any personal or community barriers to higher education

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
367 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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