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In some countries, many people are interested to know about the past of their home thwy are living in. It is because of curiosity and people can know about it from their old neighbours and the internet. This essay will express these reasons and methods that can be used to find those details.

In some countries, many people are interested to know about the past of their home thwy are living in. It is because of curiosity and people can know about it from their old neighbours and the internet. This essay will express these reasons and methods that can be used to find those details. QKJOL
In some countries, many people are interested to know about the past of their home thwy are living in. It is because of curiosity and people can know about it from their old neighbours and the internet. This essay will express these reasons and methods that can be used to find those details. On the one hand, there are many reasons why people tend to wanted exploration where they are settling in. First and foremost, it is extremely necessary for owner new house to know information related to history of new house, as a normal human nature. Obviously, almost people always want to know why the previous owner wants to sell that house and is there any previous history in this house. Secondly, some humans may like to find about the fame or reputation of a particular property that was built in earlier ages. Hence, they are able to find out the method of use to construction and material that use on those days if there is a chance to find it. Essentially, preperty buyers may get the details about the strongth and value of those buildings prior to their purchase. Furthermore, there are certain several methods for they to find these sources from those areas. Mainly, they can discuss with the serior citizens in the neighbourhood, and get knowledge about the valuable experience that they spend old ages. Although they can use reliable sources are published in libraries about those home owners while going through with the building plans that are approved by the councils In conclusion, it is vital to not that, huhmans tend to get familiar with the locations that people used to live in to find out about the reputation that it gains and the method of construction those days use. Moreover, they can rely on historical documents and neighbourhood chat on those areas to get some depth knowledge about these details.
In
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some
countries,
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many
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people
are interested
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know
about the past of their home
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thwy
are living in. It is
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because
of curiosity and
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people
can
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know
about it from their
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old
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neighbours
and the internet. This essay will express these reasons and
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methods
that can be
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used
to
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find
those
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details
.

On the one hand, there are
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many
reasons why
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people
tend to wanted exploration where they are settling in.
First
and foremost, it is
extremely
necessary for owner new
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house
to
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know
information related to history of new
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house
, as a normal human nature.
Obviously
, almost
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people
always want to
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know
why the previous owner wants to sell that
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house
and is there any previous history in this
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house
.
Secondly
,
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some
humans may like to
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find
about the fame or reputation of a particular property that
was built
in earlier ages.
Hence
, they are able to
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find
out the
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method
of
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use
to construction and material that
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use
on those days if there is a chance to
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find
it.
Essentially
,
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preperty
buyers may
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get
the
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details
about the
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strongth
and value of those buildings prior to their
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purchase
.

Furthermore
, there are certain several
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methods
for they to
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find
these sources from those areas.
Mainly
, they can discuss with the
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serior
citizens in the
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neighbourhood
, and
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get
knowledge about the valuable experience that they spend
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old
ages. Although they can
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use
reliable sources
are published
in libraries about those
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home owners
while going through with the building plans that
are approved
by the councils

In conclusion
, it is vital to not that,
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huhmans
tend to
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get
familiar with the locations that
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people
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used
to
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live
in to
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find
out about the reputation that it gains and the
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method
of construction those days
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use
.
Moreover
, they can rely on historical documents and
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neighbourhood
chat on those areas to
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get
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some
depth knowledge about these
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details
.
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IELTS essay In some countries, many people are interested to know about the past of their home thwy are living in. It is because of curiosity and people can know about it from their old neighbours and the internet. This essay will express these reasons and methods that can be used to find those details.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
316 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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