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THE REASON OF CHOOSING EY

THE REASON OF CHOOSING EY ELK2b
There are 3 factors which make me choose EY. First, EY is one of the biggest audit company not only in Viet Nam but also all over the world. And my major is accounting so applying to EY is my best selection. Second, last week EY collaborate with the accounting and auditing club of my university to organize the webinar for the internship program. I had the chance to exchange & learn from the Manager of EY HCM. I extremely admire Mr Pham Xuan Tuan and Ms Ho Thuy Linh. They are very open minded, nice and They are also the successful people. And I think all the staff of EY Viet Nam are the wonderful people. It’s my honor if I have the opportunities to work at EY. Final, EY HCM’s official office is located at Bitexco Tower which is the most crowded and modern area in HCM city. Therefore, I like EY best among 4 big firms and I hope to work at your company.
There are 3 factors which
make
me choose
EY
.
First
,
EY
is one of the biggest audit
company
not
only
in
Viet
Nam
but
also
all over the world. And my major is accounting
so
applying to
EY
is my best selection. Second, last week
EY
collaborate with the accounting and auditing club of my university to organize the webinar for the internship program. I had the chance to exchange & learn from the Manager of
EY
HCM
. I
extremely
admire Mr
Pham
Xuan
Tuan
and Ms Ho
Thuy
Linh
. They are
very
open minded
,
nice and
They are
also
the successful
people
. And I
think
all the staff of
EY
Viet
Nam
are
the wonderful
people
. It’s my honor if I have the opportunities to work at
EY
. Final,
EY
HCM
’s official office
is located
at
Bitexco
Tower which is the most crowded and modern area in
HCM
city.
Therefore
, I like
EY
best among 4
big
firms and I hope to work at your
company
.
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IELTS essay THE REASON OF CHOOSING EY

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  American English
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