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Describe a program on computet/a mobile app on the phone that you use

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Nowaday, phone are become the essential part in the life. Alongside that is appear many app can enhance the quality of life. One of the most impressive app with me name is Noxocean. Noxocean is about the way to effective using the time. It's may be not the best app, but will the best solution of the time. First, you choose the amount of time you want to do something, like 30 minutes study math, 20 minutes study english. Then the app will coundown. But what thing make it difference? That is app will prevent you from the thing that always annoy when you studying. So, it's have some limit with the another apps in your phone. With the highest mode, you musn't use the phone. It's really usefull, nothing can disturb me and I can focus in hours. About the most outstanding of app-your own island. You can buid the buiding when the coundown is over. This make me feel that I'm want to have a perfect island, so I have try more hard in study. I'm really appreciate this app, it make the study become more great, more concentrate.
Nowaday
, phone
are become
the essential part in the life. Alongside
that is
appear
many app
can enhance the quality of life. One of the most impressive app with me name is
Noxocean
.

Noxocean
is about the way to effective using the time. It's may be not the best app,
but
will the best solution of the time.
First
, you choose the amount of time you want to do something, like 30 minutes study math, 20 minutes study
english
. Then the app will
coundown
.
But
what thing
make
it difference?
That is
app will
prevent
you from the thing that always annoy when
you studying
.
So
, it's have
some
limit with the another apps in your phone. With the highest mode, you
musn
't
use
the phone. It's
really
usefull
, nothing can disturb me and I can
focus in
hours. About the most outstanding of app-your
own
island. You can
buid
the
buiding
when the
coundown
is over. This
make
me feel that I'm want to have a perfect island,
so
I have
try
more
hard
in study.

I'm
really
appreciate
this app, it
make
the study become more great, more concentrate.
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IELTS essay Describe a program on computet/a mobile app on the phone that you use

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