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Some people think that young people should choose their job freely but others opinion that parents and teachers should choose the job for them give your opinion

Some people think that young people should choose their job freely but others opinion that parents and teachers should choose the job for them give your opinion e3qRx

Choosing a career is a life changing decision it play a significant role in a life of youngsters it is awfully are good gather Liberty should private provided to youngsters for selection of occupation by themselves or should be chosen by their Garden and educator's a chord with former notion which will be explicated in subsequent paragraphs to commence with the reasons that predominant one is that it is a better way of getting success in their life youngsters know about their interest and abilities better than anyone else if they work in their interesting field which led to the fruitful result for them to examplify this if they follow career which is chosen by their parents they not take interest in it does they have to meet a lot of challenges and pressure due to this day not become successful in their life therefore to avoid such difficulties they have to choose their career by themselves in the same view when youngsters choose their career by themselves they become more responsible and independent it is a generally observed that people wants distinct things and their choices may not always agree their parents but by trusting them they give them the opportunity to learn through their experience that they can apply to help themselves to find happiness and satisfaction for instance people found Fame and success when they listen to their Desire and work on it so youngsters have to decide their own career instant pressurized by their parents to recapitulate I would like to reiterate that parents always think better for their children nevertheless deciding that occupation where they find satisfaction as well as happiness is more important

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 youngsters This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
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