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The reason behind the rising popularity of the crime novels and TV dramas, lies with the fact that the reality transmitted in the show/book, is our own.

The reason behind the rising popularity of the crime novels and TV dramas, lies with the fact that the reality transmitted in the show/book, is our own. RYpk
The reason behind the rising popularity of the crime novels and TV dramas, lies with the fact that the reality transmitted in the show/book, is our own. I am from Rio de Janeiro, a beautiful place with horrible people, and we know them what soap operas show, is not our reality. Sometimes happy endings only happen in fairy tales, which leads me to "Tropa de Elite" (Elite Squad, roughly translated) and why it was a phenomenon. The movie shows our dark side, the drug dealers with machine guns, the dangerous environment of the fevelas and the corruption in our police forces. It shows that there is nothing glamorous about being poor in Brazil (an idea that has been growing lately). And what? we relate. We know the truth, and we want it to be seen and heard, even it is a fiction vision of it. this is where the fiction part enters. When we watch the brave policeman or the brilliant CSI save the day, it gives a slight comfort. We feel like someone can save us from our reality, someone can be our hero and get the job done. It is rather gullibil thought, but it is the truth. BOPE's popularity (Rio de Janeiro's elite police force) grew rapidly after the movie's success. Want to feel heard and to be saved, and in a mix of reality and fantasy, these books and shows do that. I, for example, love them and even consider to be a police officer. But after careful consideration, I gave up the idea, for i think the world's salvation lies behind a pen or inside a book, and not on the tip of a machine gun. But there is nothing wrong to daydream on our favourite shows.
The reason behind the rising popularity of the crime novels and TV dramas, lies with the fact that the
reality
transmitted in the
show
/book, is our
own
. I am from Rio de Janeiro, a
beautiful
place with horrible
people
, and we know them what soap operas
show
, is not our
reality
.
Sometimes
happy endings
only
happen in fairy tales, which leads me to
"
Tropa
de
Elite
"
(Elite Squad, roughly translated) and why it was a phenomenon.

The movie
shows
our dark side, the drug dealers with machine guns, the
dangerous
environment of the
fevelas
and the corruption in our police forces. It
shows
that there is nothing glamorous about being poor in Brazil (an
idea
that has been growing lately). And what?
we
relate. We know the truth, and we want it to be
seen
and heard, even it is a fiction vision of it.

this
is where the fiction part enters. When we
watch
the brave policeman or the brilliant CSI save the day, it gives a slight comfort. We feel like someone can save us from our
reality
, someone can be our hero and
get
the job done. It is
rather
gullibil
thought
,
but
it is the truth.
BOPE
's popularity (Rio de Janeiro's elite police force) grew
rapidly
after the movie's success.

Want to feel heard and to
be saved
, and in a mix of
reality
and fantasy, these books and
shows
do that. I,
for example
,
love
them and even consider to be a police officer.
But
after careful consideration, I gave up the
idea
, for
i
think
the world's salvation lies behind a pen or inside a book, and not on the tip of a machine gun.
But
there is nothing
wrong
to daydream on our
favourite
shows
.
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IELTS essay The reason behind the rising popularity of the crime novels and TV dramas, lies with the fact that the reality transmitted in the show/book, is our own.

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