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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e. g. at home, when travelling, etc. ). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages? 6Abl
With an advent of the information technology it is not mandatory for many to employ at work place. This essay will argue that despite the predictable drawbacks which is caused by remote jobs, there are significant benefits associated with financial background and high productivity which could far outweigh the drawbacks. The main disadvantage is that office environment might be highly affected by those who work remotely. In other words, the kind relationship among employees tend to be easily distracted if some frequently do not come to office. As a result, companies put them on a risk people who believe that a work place plays an important role for their life reluctant to keep their work in such non-communicative environment. A related criticism is that it leads to difficulty in monitoring remote workers. Unless employer has well-developed regulation of monitoring work and advanced checking system, they should not only track the worker’s productivity progress, but also it is difficult to know how reliable the work report is. In spite of these drawbacks, work space mobility could take numerous advantages. Putting it more detailed, it is likely to be time-efficient for individuals, they can spend commuting hour on project rather than congest at the road for a long hour during the rush hour. According to the recent survey from the Trade Union Center of UK, total average UK commute takes up approximately an hour per day (58. 4 minutes). Wherever they work, it is explicitly obvious that they can promote their productivity. The another huge benefit is cost-effectiveness. Along with the time we are able to save money on gas or public transportation expenses, wear and tear on a vehicle, eating out, professional work attire and dry cleaning. Clearly, there are some negative aspects to work flexibility. Having said that, it might be harmful for the office environment and difficult to monitor mobility workers, if employer is well equipped with auditing program, working from home and other places can be far more effective for individuals.
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to employ at
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place. This essay will argue that despite the predictable drawbacks which
is caused
by remote jobs, there are significant benefits associated with financial background and high productivity which could far outweigh the drawbacks.

The main disadvantage is that office environment might be
highly
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affected
by those who
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work
remotely
.
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, the kind relationship among employees tend to be
easily
distracted if
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frequently
do not
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come
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companies
put them on a
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people
who believe that a
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work
place plays an
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important
role for their life reluctant to
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keep
their
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work
in such non-communicative environment.

A related criticism is that it leads to difficulty in monitoring remote workers. Unless employer has well-developed regulation of monitoring
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work
and advanced checking system, they should not
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only
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track
the worker’s productivity progress,
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also
it is difficult to know how reliable the
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work
report is.

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In spite of
these drawbacks,
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work
space mobility could take numerous advantages. Putting it more detailed, it is likely to be time-efficient for individuals, they can spend commuting
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hour
on project
rather
than congest at the road for a long
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hour
during the rush
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hour
. According to the recent survey from the Trade Union Center of UK, total average UK commute takes up approximately an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hour
per day (58. 4 minutes). Wherever they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
, it is
explicitly
obvious that they can promote their productivity.

The another huge benefit
is cost
-effectiveness. Along with the time we are able to save money on gas or public transportation expenses, wear and tear on a vehicle, eating out, professional
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work
attire and dry cleaning.

Clearly
, there are
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some
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negative
aspects to
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work
flexibility. Having said that, it might be harmful for the office environment and difficult to monitor mobility workers, if employer is
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well equipped
with auditing program, working from home and other places can be far more effective for individuals.
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IELTS essay Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e. g. at home, when travelling, etc. ). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
333 words
6.0
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