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The reading states that students are not allowed to post their advertisement on the wall of the student center and provides two reasons for it.

The reading states that students are not allowed to post their advertisement on the wall of the student center and provides two reasons for it. The woman holds a negative for it and opposes each reason. First, she explains that right now the building of the student center is ugly because it's soulless with gray concrete but colorful posters make it artistic and cool. Second, she explains many of the students don't use dining hall or they live off-campus and so they will not be notified about advertisement on the board of the dining hall. And that's why the woman bills and the change is a bad idea.

The reading states that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to post their advertisement on the wall of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 center and provides two reasons for it. The woman holds a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 for it and opposes each reason. First
, she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 that right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 the building of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 center is ugly This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it's soulless with gray Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).concrete,
concrete
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 colorful posters This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it artistic and cool. Second, she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 dining Use a comma before ‘or’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).hall, or
hall or
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).off-campus, and
off-campus and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they will not be notified
 about advertisement on the board of the dining hall. And that's why the woman bills and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. 