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The reading states that students are not allowed to post their advertisement on the wall of the student center and provides two reasons for it.

The reading states that students are not allowed to post their advertisement on the wall of the student center and provides two reasons for it. The woman holds a negative for it and opposes each reason. First, she explains that right now the building of the student center is ugly because it's soulless with gray concrete but colorful posters make it artistic and cool. Second, she explains many of the students don't use dining hall or they live off-campus and so they will not be notified about advertisement on the board of the dining hall. And that's why the woman bills and the change is a bad idea.
The reading states that
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are not
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allowed
to post their advertisement on the wall of the
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student
center and provides two reasons for it. The woman holds a
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negative
for it and opposes each reason.
First
, she
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explains
that right
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now
the building of the
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student
center is ugly
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because
it's soulless with gray
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concrete
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but
colorful posters
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make
it artistic and cool. Second, she
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explains
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many
of the
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students
don't
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use
dining
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hall or
they
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live
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off-campus and
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so
they will not
be notified
about advertisement on the board of the dining hall. And that's why the woman bills and the
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change
is a
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bad
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IELTS essay The reading states that students are not allowed to post their advertisement on the wall of the student center and provides two reasons for it.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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