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Exposure to international media such as films, Tv and magazines has a significant impact on local cultures. What do you think has been the impact? It's advantages outweigh it's disadvantages?

The era of cut throat competition has made people's life rather difficult. Worldwide news including television, films, cinema and news has impact on local culture of host country, some people find it negative, but according to me it has a positive influence on local culture and I will articulate my points in to following passages. Due to globalisation each and every nation expose to news and there are plathora of advantages. First and foremost is if people keep updated themselves with global news, there is no need to be afraid anymore as it also essential in their daily lives. To exemplify, looking at a current scenario, corona pendamic has feared people. Addition to that, if people know what is happening around them and entire world they become protective to their family members. Apart from that, globalisation also set a common ground for treading internationally. It helps to boost the economy and beneficial for country. More over with the help of television, films and magazines motivates people for making high quality films including 3D graphics and animation. Ultimately, host country became a successful in entertainment. For instance, with the aid of international media now many fashion industry are reaching at peak. Thus, it brings positive impact on people and has proved to be a beneficial for everyone. To conclude, even though one third of people fear about their culture or community and will get affected by world wide media, but It has more good impact on human lives than we expected. As it convey data as well as people can be stay updated with information.
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competition has made
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's life
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difficult. Worldwide
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news
including television, films, cinema and
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news
has impact on local culture of host country,
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some
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people
find it
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negative
,
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me
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positive
influence on local culture and I will articulate my points in to following passages. Due to
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globalisation
each and every nation expose to
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news
and there are
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plathora
of advantages.
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and foremost is if
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people
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keep
updated themselves with global
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news
, there is no need to be afraid anymore as
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it
also
essential in their daily
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lives
. To exemplify, looking at a
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current
scenario, corona
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pendamic
has feared
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people
. Addition to that, if
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people
know what is happening around them and entire world they become protective to their family members. Apart from that,
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globalisation
also
set a common ground for treading
internationally
. It
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helps
to boost the economy and beneficial for country. More over with the
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help
of television, films and magazines motivates
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people
for making high quality films including 3D graphics and animation.
Ultimately
, host country became a successful in entertainment.
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, with the aid of international media
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now
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many
fashion industry are reaching at peak.
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, it brings
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positive
impact on
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people
and has proved to be a beneficial for everyone.
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,
even though
one third of
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people
fear about their culture or community and will
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get
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affected
by
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world wide
media,
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but
It has more
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good
impact on human
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lives
than we
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expected
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As
it convey data
as well
as
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people
can be
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stay
updated with information.
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IELTS essay Exposure to international media such as films, Tv and magazines has a significant impact on local cultures. What do you think has been the impact? It's advantages outweigh it's disadvantages?

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