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The article discusses warning coloration which the passage defined as when an animal uses a specific color to signal the predator about the presence of such defense.

The article discusses warning coloration which the passage defined as when an animal uses a specific color to signal the predator about the presence of such defense. The professor provides an example of skunk to illustrate it. Skunks are little mammals, which are covered with fur and live in North america. They have a black line on their back from head to tail, and when they feel danger they lift their tail and spray a bad smelled liquid. Provides a wolf that approaches to hunt them. Skunk sprays that liquid on the wolf. The wolf will be afraid from that nasty smell liquid so next time when they see a skunk, they notice and will notice to stay away from them. And that's how the professor illustrates warning coloration.
The article discusses warning coloration which the passage defined as when an animal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
a specific color to signal the predator about the presence of such defense.

The professor provides an example of skunk to illustrate it. Skunks are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
mammals, which
are covered
with fur and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
North america
. They have a black line on their back from head to tail, and when they feel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
danger
they lift their tail and spray a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
smelled liquid. Provides a wolf that approaches to hunt them. Skunk sprays that liquid on the wolf. The wolf will be
The usual collocation for “afraid” is “of”, not “from”. Did you mean “afraid of”?
afraid from
that nasty smell liquid
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so
next
time when they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
a skunk, they notice and will notice to stay away from them.

And that's how the professor illustrates warning coloration.
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IELTS essay The article discusses warning coloration which the passage defined as when an animal uses a specific color to signal the predator about the presence of such defense.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
129 words
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