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The reading discussed the reasons to believe that a small mammal, 25 could not have been an active hunter but the lecturer presents reasons each why the three reasons are unconvincing.

The reading discussed the reasons to believe that a small mammal, 25 could not have been an active hunter but the lecturer presents reasons each why the three reasons are unconvincing. x0x16
at was recently found. In the reading passage, researches have demonstrated that the mammal was actually a scavenger. On the contrary, the woman in the listening affirm that recent researches has shown that the mammal was actually a hunter of small dinosaurs. In the reading the author states that the small dinosaurs they found in the stomach of the R. Robustus was probably inside an egg because normally their height was up to 2 meters. This dinosaur was too big to be the pray of R. Robustus. The Professor in the listening disagree, because probably R. robustus was a hunter of baby dinosaurs. The Author explain his statement by focusing the attention to the legs of the mammal, short and underneath. Not useful to actually chaise a victim. At the same time the Professor in the listening demonstrate that nowadays exist a mammal with the same characteristic that it is a predator: the Tasmania Devil. Finally, the last characteristics that support the thesis of the author is that in the bons of the praise founded in the stomach of the R. Robustus there are no signs of teeth as it used to be if the dinosaurs was being hunted. The professor in the listening doubt it because other researches have shown that that type of mammal was not using the back teeth to eat the prey.
at
was recently found. In the reading passage, researches have demonstrated that the
mammal
was actually a scavenger.
On the contrary
, the woman in the listening affirm that recent researches has shown that the
mammal
was actually a hunter of
small
dinosaurs.

In the reading the author states that the
small
dinosaurs they found in the stomach of the R.
Robustus
was
probably
inside an egg
because
normally
their height was up to 2 meters. This dinosaur was too
big
to be the pray of R.
Robustus
. The Professor in the listening disagree,
because
probably
R.
robustus
was a hunter of baby dinosaurs.

The Author
explain
his statement by focusing the attention to the legs of the
mammal
, short and underneath. Not useful to actually chaise a victim. At the same time the Professor in the listening demonstrate
that nowadays exist
a
mammal
with the same characteristic that it is a predator: the Tasmania Devil.

Finally
, the last characteristics that support the thesis of the author is that in the
bons
of the praise founded in the stomach of the R.
Robustus
there are no signs of teeth as it
used
to be if the dinosaurs was
being hunted
. The professor in the listening doubt it
because
other researches have shown that that type of
mammal
was not using the back teeth to eat the prey.
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IELTS essay The reading discussed the reasons to believe that a small mammal, 25 could not have been an active hunter but the lecturer presents reasons each why the three reasons are unconvincing.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
226 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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