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Many people argue that nowadays consumers buy lots of goods they don’t actually need because they are influenced by advertisements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that nowadays consumers buy lots of goods they don’t actually need because they are influenced by advertisements. 7W0N2
Customers purchase unnecessary goods impulsively for the sake of advertisements. I partly agree with this idea as there are many other factors behind the phenomenon. On the one hand, for some targeted groups, shrewd commercial advertisers use tactics to attract them and persuade them into buying as much as possible. For example, when housewives watching televisions and doing housework, commercial advertising about cleaning products brags about how efficient they are. Overwhelmed by heavy work, many of them cannot resist the temptation to pay for them. In addition, all the advertisements emphasis a desirable picture that nearly everyone dreams of. Consumers, ranging from women longing for easier housework, men desiring higher status to children simply wanting more fun. This is maybe the reason why they buy things like cleansing products, watches and toys continually. However, there are other elements contributing to buying useless things, such as the appealing appearance of goods and misleading introduction of the salesperson. As regards to the look of the commodity, many manufactures deliberately design good- looking products but without practical utility to draw people’s attention. A good example is that women tend to buy many ornate but impractical things, which are not for usage but for collection. Besides, some cunning salespeople uses psychological techniques to boost their sales, such as compliment, creating a sense of urgency and scarcity and provide overly thoughtful services that make you feel guilty if you just browse. In conclusion, despite businessmen who always use advertising to promote their goods, sometimes people pay for impractical ones not for advertisements but because they just love their looks or they encounter seasoned salesmen.
Customers
purchase
unnecessary
goods
impulsively
for the sake of advertisements. I partly
agree
with this
idea
as there are
many
other factors behind the phenomenon.

On the one hand, for
some
targeted groups, shrewd commercial advertisers
use
tactics to attract them and persuade them into buying as much as possible.
For example
, when housewives watching televisions and doing housework, commercial advertising about cleaning products brags about how efficient they are. Overwhelmed by heavy work,
many
of them cannot resist the temptation to pay for them.
In addition
, all the
advertisements
emphasis a desirable picture that
nearly
everyone dreams of. Consumers, ranging from women longing for easier housework,
men
desiring higher status to children
simply
wanting more fun. This is maybe the reason why they
buy
things like cleansing products,
watches
and toys
continually
.

However
, there are other elements contributing to buying useless things, such as the appealing appearance of
goods
and misleading introduction of the salesperson. As regards to the look of the commodity,
many
manufactures
deliberately
design
good-
looking products
but
without practical utility to draw
people
’s attention. A
good
example is that women tend to
buy
many
ornate
but
impractical things, which are not for usage
but
for collection.
Besides
,
some
cunning salespeople
uses
psychological techniques to boost their sales, such as compliment, creating a sense of urgency and scarcity and provide
overly
thoughtful services that
make
you feel guilty if you
just
browse.

In conclusion
, despite businessmen who always
use
advertising to promote their
goods
,
sometimes
people
pay for impractical ones not for advertisements
but
because
they
just
love
their
looks or
they encounter seasoned salesmen.
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IELTS essay Many people argue that nowadays consumers buy lots of goods they don’t actually need because they are influenced by advertisements.

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