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Freedom of expression is essential

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Freedom of expression is essential for artist creativity, but could not be sometimes tolerated by governments. In my opinion, the key approach to mankind's creativeness is a feeling of utter freedom in terms of individual's art exposure. Generally, lack of freedom in any aspect of life could cause anxiety, especially, if censorship opposes basic and natural rights, speech and words for instance, the situation would be exacerbated. Many research shows that restrictions against individual's rights, to some extent, weakens his/her brain functionality as well. An atmosphere, as small as a family or as expansive as a country, on the other hand, would encourage ingenuity, if freedom and liberty are revered. Creativity calls for inspiration, which is provided once society is wholly allowed to exchange ideas in the form of words, music, paints or plays. Knowing that, liberal governments admire creative artists and critics' ideas as a systematic feedback for their ruling approaches. However, conservative governor, by limiting liberty, fails to retain such responses from the specialists. Although freedom to expressing ideas is generally being venerated in many democratic societies, it should not be idolized, because absolute liberation would fail to protect the discipline. Eliminating the restrictions entirely, particularly for artists, whose life, profession and behavior are subjected to mass media, would definitely deteriorate individual privacy in the public. In my country, for example, accusing a person through mass media deserves a tougher punishment than just ordinary allegation. So, this indicates that bound-free liberation for artists could be even more vital concerning public order. In conclusion, from a tinge of brain functionality to political regime regulation in a country, could all be the impact of experiencing glorified liberation in a society. while, absolute freedom of expression is not applicable, specially for the artists who are more likely to slump individual’s privacy through mass media.
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governments
. In my opinion, the key approach to mankind's creativeness is a feeling of utter
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freedom
in terms of individual's art exposure.

Generally
, lack of
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freedom
in any aspect of life could cause anxiety,
especially
, if censorship opposes basic and natural rights, speech and words
for instance
, the situation would
be exacerbated
.
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Many
research
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shows
that restrictions against individual's rights, to
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some
extent, weakens his/her brain functionality
as well
. An atmosphere, as
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small
as a family or as expansive as a country,
on the other hand
, would encourage ingenuity, if
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freedom
and liberty
are revered
.

Creativity calls for inspiration, which
is provided
once society is wholly
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allowed
to exchange
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ideas
in the form of words, music, paints or plays. Knowing that, liberal
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governments
admire creative
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artists
and critics'
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ideas
as a systematic feedback for their ruling approaches.
However
, conservative governor, by limiting liberty, fails to retain such responses from the specialists.

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being venerated
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democratic societies, it should not
be idolized
,
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because
absolute liberation would fail to protect the discipline. Eliminating the restrictions
entirely
,
particularly
for
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artists
, whose life, profession and behavior
are subjected
to mass media, would definitely deteriorate individual privacy in the public. In my country,
for example
, accusing a person through mass media deserves a tougher punishment than
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just
ordinary allegation.
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So
, this indicates that bound-free liberation for
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artists
could be even more vital concerning public order.

In conclusion
, from a tinge of brain functionality to political regime regulation in a country, could all be the impact of experiencing glorified liberation in a society.
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while
, absolute
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of expression is not applicable,
specially
for the
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artists
who are more likely to slump individual’s privacy through mass media.
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IELTS essay Freedom of expression is essential

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
303 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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