Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The rate of youth crime is rising in many countries What are the causes of this trend Suggest some solutions to decrease such rate

The rate of youth crime is rising in many countries What are the causes of this trend Suggest some solutions to decrease such rate r8bBn

It is true that, in this contemporary era, crime is being escalated day by day in all over the world mostly in youngsters and it is a worrying trend. Furthermore, government should start some campaign, attention should be given by parents and so on. To start with, there are numerous points on this. Firstly, wealthy families give high pocket money to their children and never check where they are spending their money that is why children fall or adapt bad habbit and addict to smoking, drinking, gambling e. t. c. Another reason could be, unemployment rate is being increased steadily teenagers do not have much job for doing and that is why they prefer to take some heinous steps like kidnapping, murder, robbery in banks and homes and so on. Looking on the solutions, a numbers of camping should be started by government in which they provide better moral lessons to children in funny ways. In addition, government should also pass some draconian rule against creation of new companies and provide some relief in taxation so could more youngsters could start their own start-ups. On a concluding note, undoubtedly crime is increasing we know very well and it is not good for our societies or for country as well yet, we must understand that parents also play a vital role in children life they should always support their children in everything and government should provide more jobs after that we could handle these things.

It is true that, in this contemporary era, crime is being escalated
 day by day in all over the world mostly
 in youngsters and it is a worrying trend. Furthermore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 campaign, attention should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by parents and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with, there are numerous points on this. Firstly
, wealthy families give high pocket money to their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 and never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 where they are spending their money that is
 why You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 fall or adapt This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
Possible spelling mistake found.habitrabbithobbitwabbit
habbit
 and addict to smoking, drinking, gambling e. t. c. Another reason could be, unemployment rate is being increased
steadily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 do not have much job for doing and that is
 why they prefer to take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 heinous steps like kidnapping, murder, robbery in banks and homes and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on.

Looking on the solutions, Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a number" or simply "numbers"?a numbernumbers
a numbers
 of camping should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 in which they provide better moral lessons to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:amusinghumorous
funny
 ways. In addition
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 should also
 pass This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible incorrect capitalization. Some adjectives that are derived from proper nouns can have both an initial capital letter and an initial lower case letter. If there is a close association with the proper noun, use "Draconian".Draconian
draconian
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 against creation of new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 and provide This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 relief in taxation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 could more youngsters could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
-ups.

On a concluding note, undoubtedly
 crime is increasing we know This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well and it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for our societies or for country as well
yet
, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 understand that parents also
 play a vital role in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 life they should always support their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 in everything and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 should provide more jobs after that we could handle these things. 