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do you agree or disagree that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information?

that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information? WygaK
The internet is a cheap and fast communication tools. People excrete internet according with their needs. Generally internet has countless advantages and it can prepare newest and most important information only in few seconds. Whereas like all technologies the use of internet should be taught to users wing to internet technology don’t convert to means for waste time and different abuses. Eventually I firmly believe that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. I state my idea by two reasons; The first reason is about scientific information of internet. This technology can provide all of results and requirement equipment’s and methods of researches in different universities and teaching institutes which they are performed. In fact by means of internet people are award about new progresses in different countries of whole the world. Such as medicine, industry, astronomy and … In addition hearing about variety advancements can be significant incentive for graduates and students to create new methods and idea. On the other word make students become more ingenious in variety ground of science. Consequently internet easily informs nations of changes and world events. On the other hand internet enables students to participate online classes which its very beneficiary for student and someone can’t present on their classes. Because now days most of progressive universities hold their teaching classes online. Sometimes online classes are more economical and with lowest expense. For example many persons who start to study English language. They use of online teaching classes of teachers like molly stone, Steven, and etc… So I used of guidelines which it was said in teaching movies on the internet. At the second through internet all of the news are spread in whole the world. And it makes all people aware of events. Some countries due to political issues don’t permit to presses to assert news freely. On the other world governments always fear of spreading news that make to instigate people against to them. In fact sometimes governments attempt to disguise news and revolutions other nations. So they try to prohibit of spreading news or modifying news. For example Iran’s presses always summarize news of Syria country due to soldiers and Iranian forces are fighting with Isis. Probably Iran’s government don’t want spreading dire and uncomfortable news among people. Consequently internet is functional technology which to aware people of facts events. To make long story short, internet enables people to inform different scientific information in cheap and fast way. On the other hand internet gives information that it may be filter in some country.
The internet is a
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cheap
and
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fast
communication tools.
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People
excrete internet
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according with
their needs.
Generally
internet has countless advantages and it can prepare newest and most
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important
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information
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only
in few seconds. Whereas like all
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technologies
the
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use
of internet should
be taught
to users wing to internet
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technology
don’t convert to means for waste time and
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different
abuses.

Eventually
I
firmly
believe that the internet provides
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people
with
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a lot of
valuable
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information
. I state my
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idea
by two reasons;

The
first
reason is about scientific
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information
of internet. This
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technology
can provide
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all of results
and requirement equipment’s and methods of researches in
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different
universities and
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teaching
institutes which they
are performed
. In fact by means of internet
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people
are award about
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new
progresses in
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different
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countries
of whole the
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world
. Such as medicine, industry, astronomy and …

In
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addition
hearing about variety advancements can be significant incentive for graduates and
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students
to create
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new
methods and
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idea
. On the
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other
word
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make
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students
become more ingenious in variety ground of science.
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Consequently
internet
easily
informs nations of
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changes
and
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world
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events
. On the
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other
hand internet enables
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students
to participate
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online
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classes
which its
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very
beneficiary for
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student
and someone can’t present on their
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classes
.
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Because
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now
days most of progressive universities hold their
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teaching
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classes
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online
.
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Sometimes
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online
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classes
are more economical and with
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lowest
expense.

For example
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many
persons who
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start
to study English language. They
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use
of
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online
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teaching
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classes
of teachers like molly stone, Steven,
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and etc
…

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So
I
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used
of guidelines which it
was said
in
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teaching
movies on the internet.

At the second through internet
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all of the
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news
are spread
in whole the
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world
. And it
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makes
all
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people
aware of
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events
.
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Some
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countries
due to political issues don’t permit to presses to assert
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news
freely
. On the
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other
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world
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governments
always fear of spreading
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news
that
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make
to instigate
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people
against to them. In fact
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sometimes
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governments
attempt to disguise
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news
and revolutions
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other
nations.
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So
they try to prohibit of spreading
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news
or modifying
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news
.
For example
Iran’s presses always summarize
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news
of Syria
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country
due to soldiers and Iranian forces are fighting with Isis.
Probably
Iran’s
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government
don’t want spreading dire and uncomfortable
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news
among
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people
.
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Consequently
internet is functional
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technology
which to aware
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people
of facts
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events
.

To
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make
long story short, internet enables
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people
to inform
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different
scientific
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information
in
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cheap
and
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fast
way. On the
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other
hand internet gives
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information
that it may be
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filter
in
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some
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country
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IELTS essay that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information?

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
426 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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