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The rate of unemployment in some countries is high. Because of this, there is no need to complete an education beyond a primary school level.

Undoubtedly, nowadays, the unemployment rate has risen and as a result less career opportunities there are. Therefore, a significant proportion of graduates think of finding a temporary positions instead of entering higher education and acquiring a university degree. However, in my opinion, these two facts should not be confused because education yourself is vital not only to get a job in the future but also is beneficial for your progressing to a useful individual. So, no matter the situation which is prevailed at the job market, higher education must be supported and promoted. only happen through education.

Undoubtedly
, nowadays, the unemployment rate has risen and as a result
 less career opportunities there are. Therefore
, a significant proportion of graduates This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 of finding a temporary positions instead
 of entering higher You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 and acquiring a university degree. However
, in my opinion, these two facts should not be confused
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because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 yourself is vital not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a job The usual preposition for “get a job” is “with” for an organization.with the future
in the future
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 is beneficial for your progressing to a useful individual. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, no matter the situation which is prevailed
The usual collocation is “on the job” or “at work”.on the jobat work
at the job
 market, higher You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be supported
 and promoted.

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only
 happen through You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
. 