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Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Several people believe that promotion stimulate us to buy new items which are not essential for us. On the striking contrast, other people argue that the advertisements introduce fresh products that boost our lives. In the following essay we can debates the positive and negative aspects of publicizing stock. Genuinely, if we can discuss about the advantage of the advertisement's it's a part and parcel of our life. The entire world what the current situation is going on or what a modern things establish in the universe only it comes to our notices related to the announcement. And for that purpose companies hired some fashion designers who work on it that how they can obtain the attraction of the people and predominantly, explain the benefits of that product like if it's a smartphone or laptop that how if will be useful for us and in this technologies and scientific world it's not a piece of cake to survive without these such things. While on the other hand, people admit that these promotion prompt them to purchase these items but due to the circumstances it's not easy for them to buy. Significantly, many people are facing some issues where they are too obstacle to complete their bread and butter. Repercussion, in some places they feel themselves to be down to the dumbs. As per discussion, from my perspective announcement have many beneficial effects on society. I strongly agree that advertisements upgrades our standard of life and for that reason they can accerlate that goods in every nook and corner of the universe.
Several
people
believe that promotion stimulate us to
buy
new items which are not essential for us. On the striking contrast, other
people
argue that the advertisements introduce fresh products that boost our
lives
. In the following essay we can
debates
the
positive
and
negative
aspects of publicizing stock.

Genuinely
, if we can
discuss about the
advantage of the
advertisement's
it's
a part and parcel of our life. The entire world what the
current
situation is going on or what
a modern things
establish in the universe
only
it
comes
to our notices related to the announcement. And for that purpose
companies
hired
some
fashion designers who work on it that how they can obtain the attraction of the
people
and
predominantly
,
explain
the benefits of that product like if
it's
a smartphone or laptop that how if will be useful for us and in
this
technologies and scientific world
it's
not a piece of cake to survive without these such things.

While
on the other hand
,
people
admit that
these promotion
prompt them to
purchase
these items
but
due to the circumstances
it's
not easy for them to
buy
.
Significantly
,
many
people
are facing
some
issues where they are too obstacle to complete their bread and butter. Repercussion, in
some
places they feel themselves to be down to the
dumbs
.

As per discussion, from my perspective announcement have
many
beneficial effects on society. I
strongly
agree
that advertisements upgrades our standard of life and for that reason they can
accerlate
that
goods
in every nook and corner of the universe.
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IELTS essay Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
5.5
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