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The Ram Khamhaeng inscription

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Most of the countries around the world generally had historical evidence on different platforms. Some may be daily life supplies or tools, while others were letters or notes. For instance, in Thailand, there was an excellent record which is a stone inscription (The Ram Khamhaeng Inscription). This slab of stone was contained within important details which is according to situations in the Thai past. Therefore, this paper will be discussed towards the aspects of King Ram Kamhaeng through the inscription. To begin with, the purpose or reasons of the King to placed this stone in his kingdom. The intention would be to preserve Thai history. In other words, he would like to place this stone as a reminder to people today. They can learn about religion or significant events in that time. As well, this stone contains Thai history in the period of Sukhothai. To place this stone in the public also automatically given the role to people back then as a witness for the real contents that located on the stone. That is to say. He would like to give an idea to people from the past to the new generation what how was Sukhothai in the past look like such as geography, society, laws, values, etc. Plus, this stone was the most essential evidence to insist that Sukhothai land was existing before. And it could be the only way for people from the past to communicate with people in the present and future time. The stone inscription addresses nowadays individuals about 13th century Sukhothai in several dimensions. It is said that this period of King Ram Khamhaeng was the most powerful or wealthy time. Agriculture played a major role in economic health. There were no restrictions in the trade market that means commoners had the freedom to sell and buy. Furthermore, the laws were also pursued firmly. When it came to ambiguity, there would be a clear examination to ensure fairness. A bell hung over the front gate to solve the sadness of people by directly consulting with the ruler. This bell also represented concentration from the king towards his people. Besides, as seen from the fact in the past, men had more power than women. And this period also had slavery. After the warfare, the looser must be surrender by sending their people to become slaves, especially for women and children. This shows persecution at that time. Moreover, this stone also shows religious preference. It demonstrates how Buddhism played the main role in the Sukhothai land. Thai people have been believed in the precepts and dharma for a long time ago. In conclusion, in order to verify the information carved onto the stone is precise. There is a lot of evidence that can be proved. As seen from the real existing name of the kings, places, cities, and years. These things are the fact that no one can deny that the contents are real and can be examined.
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generally
had historical evidence on
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different
platforms.
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Some
may
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be
daily life supplies or tools, while others were letters or notes.
For instance
, in Thailand, there was an excellent record which is a
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stone
inscription (The Ram
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Khamhaeng
Inscription). This slab of
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stone
was contained
within
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important
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details
which is according to situations in the Thai
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past
.
Therefore
, this paper will
be discussed
towards the aspects of
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King
Ram
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Kamhaeng
through the inscription.

To
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begin
with, the purpose or reasons of the
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King
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to placed
this
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stone
in his kingdom. The intention would be to preserve Thai history.
In other words
, he would like to place this
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stone
as a reminder to
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people
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today
. They can learn about religion or significant
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events
in that
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time
.
As well
, this
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stone
contains Thai history in the period of
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Sukhothai
. To place this
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stone
in the public
also
automatically
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given
the role to
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people
back then as a witness for the real contents that located on the
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stone
.
That is
to say. He would like to give an
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idea
to
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people
from the
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past
to the new generation what how was
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Sukhothai
in the
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past
look like such as geography, society, laws, values, etc. Plus, this
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stone
was the most essential evidence to insist that
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Sukhothai
land was existing
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before
. And it could be the
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only
way for
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people
from the
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past
to communicate with
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people
in the present and future time.

The
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stone
inscription addresses nowadays individuals about 13th century
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Sukhothai
in several dimensions. It
is said
that this period of
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King
Ram
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Khamhaeng
was the most powerful or wealthy
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time
. Agriculture played a major role in economic health. There were no restrictions in the trade market that means commoners had the freedom to sell and
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buy
.
Furthermore
, the laws were
also
pursued
firmly
. When it came to ambiguity, there would be a
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clear
examination to ensure fairness. A bell hung over the front gate to solve the sadness of
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people
by
directly
consulting with the ruler. This bell
also
represented concentration from the
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king
towards his
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people
.
Besides
, as
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seen
from the fact in the
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past
,
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men
had more power than women. And this period
also
had slavery. After the warfare, the looser
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must
be surrender by sending their
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people
to become slaves,
especially
for women and children. This
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shows
persecution at that
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time
.
Moreover
, this
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stone
also
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shows
religious preference. It demonstrates how Buddhism played the main role in the
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Sukhothai
land. Thai
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people
have
been believed
in the precepts and dharma for a long
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time
ago.

In conclusion
, in order to verify the information carved onto the
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stone
is precise. There is
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a lot of
evidence that can
be proved
. As
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seen
from the real existing name of the
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kings
, places, cities, and years. These things are the fact that no one can deny that the contents are real and can
be examined
.
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IELTS essay The Ram Khamhaeng inscription

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
491 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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