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The question on if Government should hold the public accountable for taking care of their location environment is debatable .I agree with the motion because when one is placed in charge of something the individual automatically pays full attention and care to the subject matter To begin with, dangerous activities that affects the environment are carried out by the public and the effect is also suffered by them . Activities such as deforestation,bush burning, inappropriate waste and sewage disposal is a public challenge that affects the environment and individual health in general .if individuals are charged with the task of being responsible they will understand that the smoke emitted during burning damages the ozone layer that shield us from the direct rays of the sun, deforestation increased soil infertility and waste causes health and environmental challenges especially when these waste blocks the drainage system . when individuals become aware of this they tend to engage in a

The question on if Government should hold the public accountable for taking care of their location environment is debatable. I agree with the motion because when one is placed in charge of something the individual automatically pays full attention and care to the subject matter To begin with, dangerous activities that affects the environment are carried out by the public and the effect is also suffered by them. Activities such as deforestation, bush burning, inappropriate waste and sewage disposal is a public challenge that affects the environment and individual health in general. if individuals are charged with the task of being responsible they will understand that the smoke emitted during burning damages the ozone layer that shield us from the direct rays of the sun, deforestation increased soil infertility and waste causes health and environmental challenges especially when these waste blocks the drainage system. when individuals become aware of this they tend to engage in activities that preserve the environmentFurther more, despite the environmental laws enacted people deliberately or ignorantly refuse to take part in caring for the environment because they feel it is a Government problem. for example monthly sanitation is done every last Saturday month in nigeria in order to keep the surrounding areas neat, alot of individuals don't participate. if environmental laws that comes with penalty can be created and educate the ignorant ones about the benefits of a safe environment they will pay more attention to it because it takes it takes individualized effort to make an healthy environmental strategy become reality Government can assist in promoting environmental awareness but the task of achieving a safe environment lies soley in our hands

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Government
 should hold the public accountable for taking care of their location You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 is debatable. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the motion This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 when one is placed
 in charge of something the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrespectivesingularpersonalsolelonespecific
individual
automatically
 pays full attention and care to the This phrase is redundant. Consider using "subject".subject
subject matter
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begin
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dangerous
 activities that affects the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
are carried
 out by the public and the effect is also
 suffered by them. Activities such as deforestation, bush burning, inappropriate waste and sewage disposal is a public challenge that affects the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrespectivesingularpersonalsolelonespecific
individual
 health in general
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwomanhuman beingentitypersonchildparty
individuals
are charged
 with the task of being responsible they will understand that the smoke emitted during burning damages the ozone layer that shield us from the direct rays of the sun, deforestation increased soil infertility and waste causes health and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnatural
environmental
 challenges especially
 when these waste blocks the drainage system. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
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individuals
 become aware of this they tend to engage in activities that preserve the Possible spelling mistake found.
environmentFurther
 more, despite the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnatural
environmental
 laws enacted This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
deliberately
 or ignorantly
 refuse to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in caring for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they feel it is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 problem. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
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 every last Saturday month in Possible spelling mistake found.NigeriaNigerian
nigeria
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
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alot
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwomanhuman beingentitypersonchildparty
individuals
 don't participate. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
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environmental
 laws that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with penalty can be created
 and educate the ignorant ones about the benefits of a safe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 they will pay more attention to it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "it takes".it takes
it takes it takes
 individualized effort to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 healthy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnatural
environmental
 strategy become reality This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 can assist in promoting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnatural
environmental
 awareness This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the task of achieving a safe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
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soley
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