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The question is what is the reason of this dirty and who it effict to human and animal ?

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There is no doubt that in these days most of our sea and rivers it have alot of dirty which is effiect to our health and to animal at well. The question is what is the reason of this dirty and who it effict to human and animal? In this eassy i will write about this subject and i will suptract the a reason of this issuo. in term of problem offten of people when they to the sea or to a bicnic on the rivers they usually bring with him food and snaks to eat it and when they eat it they usually dont throw it in a garpech they throw it on the sea and it hit the fishes and a person at well. the main reason are given i support this cliam that the people they just ignore the responspialty on the our enviroment illustrate when the people do this a shame things on our sea or or river it effict on all of the enviroment such as a huoman so when the people want to set down they cant becouse there is alot of dirty here and alot of mycrobs and also the fish inside the sea perhaps they will diy becouse they will eat this dirty and then the human cant eat this fish also. in other word any of these inviroment will impact badly. inconclusion it is evident that the dirty it impact to our health. most ensure steps are taken to pevent this phenomenon from deteiorating futu
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sea
and rivers it
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have
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alot
of
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dirty
which is
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effiect
to our health and to animal at well. The question is what is the reason of this
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dirty
and who it
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effict
to human and animal? In this
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eassy
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will write about this subject and
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suptract
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the a
reason of this
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issuo
.

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in
term of problem
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of
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people
when they to the
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or to a
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bicnic
on the rivers they
usually
bring with him food and
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snaks
to
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eat
it and when they
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eat
it they
usually
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dont
throw it in a
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garpech
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sea
and it hit the fishes and a person at well.
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the
main reason are
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support this
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cliam
that the
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ignore
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responspialty
on
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illustrate when the
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people
do this a shame things on our
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sea
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river it
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effict
on
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enviroment
such as a
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huoman
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people
want to set down they
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there is
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dirty
here and
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of
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also
the fish inside the
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perhaps they will
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diy
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becouse
they will
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this
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and then the human cant
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eat
this fish
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.
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in
other word any of these
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inviroment
will impact
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inconclusion
it is evident that the
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dirty
it impact to our health.
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most
ensure steps
are taken
to
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pevent
this phenomenon from
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deteiorating
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futu

IELTS essay The question is what is the reason of this dirty and who it effict to human and animal?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
253 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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