It is believed by many people that in metro cities standard of living is getting declined. There are many reasons such as traffic congestion and lack of person communication which are crucial factor behind this degradation. However, there are possible solutions which can help to restore the quality of life of city dwellers.
One of the pressing problems of mega cities is traffic Jam. This is because present public transport system is inadequate to serve the increasing population in these places. As a result people often got stuck in traffic congestion. As per recent survey of Mumbai city, more than 67% of people travel by public transport and spend approximately 3 hours for commuting between office and their home. However, this issue can be solved by improving the capacity of existing transport system and introduction of new one. For example, in Japan, after the introduction of underground metro, no more issue of traffic jam is observed.
Another related issue is lack of communication among people. Majority of people do not get time to talk to their neighbours and relatives due to lack of time. More often than not, they are running to complete their to-do list of every day and do not get time to share their feelings and emotions with others. As a result, they are often feel isolated. This issue can be resolved by arranging the social gatherings during weekends. Platforms where information about such events should be built and made available. This will aid people to come closer which in turn improve their quality of life.
In conclusion, due to the fast life of city dwellers, issues such as lack of personal time and reduced personal communication is diminishing their quality of life, but by building public transportation system they can be solved.
It
is believed
by
many
people
that in metro
cities
standard of living is getting declined. There are
many
reasons such as
traffic
congestion and
lack
of person communication which are crucial factor behind this degradation.
However
, there are possible solutions which can
help
to restore the quality of life of city dwellers.
One of the pressing problems of mega
cities
is
traffic
Jam. This is
because
present public transport system is inadequate to serve the increasing population in these places.
As
a result
people
often
got
stuck in
traffic
congestion. As per recent survey of Mumbai city, more than 67% of
people
travel by public transport and spend approximately 3 hours for commuting between office and their home.
However
, this
issue
can
be solved
by improving the capacity of existing transport system and introduction of new one.
For example
, in Japan, after the introduction of underground metro, no more
issue
of
traffic
jam
is observed
.
Another related
issue
is
lack
of communication among
people
. Majority of
people
do not
get
time
to talk to their
neighbours
and relatives due to
lack
of
time
. More
often
than not, they are running to complete their to-do list of every day and do not
get
time
to share their feelings and emotions with others.
As a result
, they are
often
feel isolated. This
issue
can
be resolved
by arranging the social gatherings during weekends. Platforms where information about such
events
should
be built
and made available. This will aid
people
to
come
closer which in turn
improve
their quality of life.
In conclusion
, due to the
fast
life of city dwellers,
issues
such as
lack
of personal
time
and
reduced
personal communication is diminishing their quality of life,
but
by building public transportation system they can
be solved
.
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