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the quality of an effective player

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As for the qualities of an effective team player, I shold consider a few elements are required to become. A leadership and cooperating with other members as would be an absolute must ability and cooperating with other members as well. For that, communicating with them is vital as well. To begin with, if a player with a leadship is on the top of a team, other palyers will follow hie or her since they can trust the leader. When I used to play a basketball at my high school, there was a talented student who was quite good at giving directions as well as playing basketball within the team. Our team could build a strong relationship each other thanks to her. It can be said that cooperating each other is different essential factor, needless to say. Team players should tell or express what they feel and think as presice as possible to understand. Then, they need to take action to pursue the accomplishments they would like to if you want to obtain better results or be in a higher position. Furthermore, it is critical to respect to others. For example, if a player keep yelling at other members all the time, the other might be frustrated and disappointed with the player. Rather, they cannot have constructive communication. To avoid that situation, people should show respect and be polite to the members and that can lead to raise their team level both of physical and mental aspects. When it comes to the quality of effective player, I belive that three keys I menioned above would be important. A player with a leadership should control the team excatly. Those athletes have to cooperate with other members and productive communication each other is essential as well.
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members
as would be an absolute
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ability and cooperating with
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members
as well
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leadship
is on the top of a
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,
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palyers
will follow hie or her since they can trust the leader. When I
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used
to play a basketball at my high school, there was a talented student who was quite
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good
at giving directions
as well
as playing basketball within the
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. Our
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could build a strong relationship each
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thanks to her.

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that cooperating each
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is
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as possible to understand. Then, they need to take action to pursue the accomplishments they would like to if you want to obtain better results or be in a higher position.

Furthermore
, it is critical to respect to others.
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yelling at
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all the time, the
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might
be frustrated
and disappointed with the
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Rather
, they cannot have constructive communication. To avoid that situation,
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people
should
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show
respect and be polite to the
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members
and that can lead to raise their
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team
level both of physical and mental aspects.

When it
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comes
to the quality of effective
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menioned
above would be
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. A
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with a leadership should control the
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excatly
. Those athletes
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cooperate with
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IELTS essay the quality of an effective player

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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