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I’ve just killed my husband. I killed Patrick - the man I loved

I’ve just killed my husband. I killed Patrick - the man I loved KyJw1

9. 28. 2021 I’ve just killed my husband. I killed Patrick - the man I loved. I’ve done what I want but why am I excruciating instead of being ecstatic. Will Patrick hates me? What if the police found out? Will they kill me? I’m willing to go with Patrick but how about our child? No no no, Mary! settle down. Nothing will be going to happen. How could the police find out? If I won’t tell them, they won’t know. All I need to do now is act natural, become the victim, be the innocent housewife. I’m sorry Patrick. I know what you going to say and I don’t want to divorce you. If you’re alive you will make me divorce at all cost. I just don’t want to. You’re dead but at least I’m still your wife. Forgive me, my husband. Everything I do is because I love you. In another life, I will be your wife again. We will have a handsome son and a gorgeous daughter. Our family will have a happy lifetime.

9. 28. 2021

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just
 killed my husband. I killed Patrick Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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loved
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 why am I excruciating instead
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settle
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tell
 them, they won’t know. All I need to do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 is act natural, become the victim, be the innocent housewife.

I’m sorry Patrick. I know what Did you mean "you're going", "you are going", or "you were going"?you're goingyou are goingyou were going
you going
 to say and I don’t want to divorce you. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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make
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 at least I’m still
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because
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love
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In another life, I will be your wife again. We will have a handsome son and a gorgeous daughter. Our family will have a happy lifetime. 