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the benefits of having a close friends and acquaintances

the benefits of having a close friends and acquaintances 6LExK

Friends are very important to people’s lives. Generally, some people like to spend time with a large number of friends while others prefer having one or two close friends. In my perspective, people need both close friends and acquaintances because they meet our social needs in different ways. When we have close friends, they can help us to celebrate good times and provide support during bad times. Likewise, if we have a large number of causal friends, we will have a broad relationship and we will have more knowledge.

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