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The provided series of pictures depict the data on the production of bricks for the construction industry.

The provided series of pictures depict the data on the production of bricks for the construction industry. PWWaj

The provided series of pictures depict the data on the production of bricks for the construction industry. Overall, it is obvious that there are several essential steps involved in the process of the manufacturing of bricks, commencing with being dug the ground and culminating in ready products being dispatched to markets so as to be purchased by customers. In the initial stage, after digging the clay through the special machines, namely digger, the metal grid goes through the roller. In the following stage, once the products have been mixed with water and sand, they are cut up in 2 separate methods (by wire culter or mould). Next, the outputs are sent to drying oven for staying 24-48 hours before being baked in different part of the device, such as the kilns (200C-980C and 870C-1300C) and cooling chamber (48-72 hrs). At the end of process, having been packed, the ready bricks are delivered to the supermarkets in order to be sold for clients.

The provided series of pictures depict the data on the production of bricks for the construction industry.

Overall
, it is obvious that there are several essential steps involved in the process of the manufacturing of bricks, commencing with being dug
 the ground and culminating in ready products being dispatched
 to markets 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 by customers.

In the initial stage, after digging the clay through the special machines, namely
 digger, the metal grid goes through the roller. In the following stage, once the products have been mixed
 with water and sand, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 up in 2 separate methods (by wire Possible spelling mistake found.cutterCusterCoultercutercutlercurter
culter
 or Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
). Next
, the outputs are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to drying oven for staying 24-48 hours This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being baked
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 part of the device, such as the kilns (200C-980C and 870C-1300C) and cooling chamber (48-72 hrs). At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of process, having been packed
, the ready bricks are delivered
 to the supermarkets in order to be sold
 for clients. 