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Knowledge gaps in languages

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participants reported that there are knowledge gaps among students in the Arabic language, the English and Turkish foreign languages that they study in the region. The participants acknowledged the importance of the Arabic language to understand the meanings, and that the student's weakness in the Arabic language is weakness in grammar and writing. Meanwhile, participants reported that there are knowledge gaps in the English language, which lead to the student's inability to research and learn about scientific efforts in the same field in other languages. Participants added that there is weakness in the Turkish language. and the participants emphasized the importance of the Turkish language, where its importance lies in the fact that Turkey is the neighboring country of Syria and that Turkey offers scholarships to Syrian students to complete their studies in Turkish universities. These issues were highlighted by participants who said:
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participants
reported that there are knowledge gaps among students in the Arabic
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language
, the English and Turkish foreign
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languages
that they study in the region. The
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participants
acknowledged the importance of the Arabic
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language
to understand the meanings, and that the student's weakness in the Arabic
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language
is weakness in grammar and writing.

Meanwhile,
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participants
reported that there are knowledge gaps in the English
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language
, which lead to the student's inability to research and learn about scientific efforts in the same field in other
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languages
.
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Participants
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that there is weakness in the Turkish
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language
.
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and
the
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emphasized the importance of the Turkish
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language
, where its importance lies in the fact that Turkey is the neighboring country of Syria and that Turkey offers scholarships to Syrian students to complete their studies in Turkish universities.

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IELTS essay Knowledge gaps in languages

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
143 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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