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What are the good and bad things about it?

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There are many advantages of being famous. If you are famous, you might also be wealthy. You can buy a big house and an expensive car. Another advantage is that you have fans. They take photographs of you and send you letters. One more advantage is if you are famous you don't have to wait in queues. You can go to the front. The last advantage of being famous is you can use your fame and money to help good causes. If you give money to charity, others will do so too. In this way, you can make a real difference in the world.

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