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The provided process illustrates the information about wheels of life the honey bee. The data has been given in six stages.

The provided process illustrates the information about wheels of life the honey bee. The data has been given in six stages. br50Q

It can be vividly manifested that the process start with female lay one or two eggs every three days and it ends after taking 34 to 36 days. Analyzing the data about life process of honey bee in the first step honey bee is lay 1 or 2 eggs every three day. After that, eggs are hatch after nine and ten days. Apart from this, honey bee start to remove hatch on body. after seven days it begins growing process and, approximately 3 times as it grows which called nymph molts level. Moving to the rest of data, in the forth stage honey bee start growth in nearly nine days. Then, young adult honey bee takes three day for younger process and, it takes four days for go on maturity level. Eventually, it takes totally 34 to 36 day for compete this process.

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