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Projects by Amata Industrial Park

Projects by Amata Industrial Park W83eq

The figure displays a percentages of a number of businesses which they are expected to run in Amata Industry Park. It consists * 9 pieces of pie to be considered including at least 15% and up to 15% parts. To begin with the high portions, first of which is the chemicals, plastics, and paints * are the highest sectors in the park. Then, the second most * segment is textiles and garments is at 17%. At 15% of the pie, there is the Auto parts section. Despite of the specific sectors previously mentioned, there are a 20% balance that it is contained other undefined business. Moving to the shares below 15%, most of them ranged between 4% to 5%. Firstly, Electronic devices industry is projected to has 6% shares. Secondly, there are three industries that are going to run their business with 5% portions. Lastly, the packaging business is anticipated to has a lowest balance at 4%.

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