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Advertisement is one of the biggest marketing strategy and the quality of advertisement will decide which product is going to hit the users and not the quality of the product. Even though the quality of product can be compromised but it can’t be done with advertisement. The problem is that for big scale businesses invest a huge amount on publicity and due to this there is chance to compromise with quality. But a common people always attracted towards product with large marketing. In other words people are paying for watching marketing indirectly. Its should be change and every one need to be aware about the facts and know the truth. Advertisement is just a tool for marketing, not everything they are showing true. People should buy the product which spend more concentration toward the quality not on promotion. Large businesses always focus on promotion over than quality and they are pricing for their brand also. Its always better to purchase products from local small-scale business.
Advertisement is one of the biggest
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marketing
strategy and the
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quality
of advertisement will decide which
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product
is going to hit the users and not the
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quality
of the
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product
.
Even though
the
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quality
of
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product
can
be compromised
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but
it can’t
be done
with advertisement.

The problem is that for
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big
scale businesses invest a huge amount on publicity and due to this there is chance to compromise with
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quality
.
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But
a common
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people
always attracted towards
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product
with large
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marketing
.
In other words
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people
are paying for watching
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marketing
indirectly
.
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Its
should be
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change
and every one need to be aware about the facts and know the truth. Advertisement is
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just
a tool for
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marketing
, not everything they are showing true.

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People
should
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buy
the
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product
which spend more concentration toward the
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quality
not on promotion. Large businesses always focus on promotion
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over
than
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
quality and
they are pricing for their brand
also
. Its always better to
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purchase
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products
from local
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small
-scale business.
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IELTS essay advertisements play a major role

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
165 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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