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you have visited exhibition

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Exhibition plays an important roll of promote verius kind of product. there was lot of exhibition available in my city. but i would like and talk about m. k. exhibition. m. k. exhibition was run by m. k. electro market. there was big gate on entrance. gate right side parking facility available. this exhibition was divided in 4 part. the first part is routine electronic items. fridge, air condition, washing machine, microwave and many more routine electronic items available in this part. the second part was fun related items. television, digital video player, sound system, home theater and many more fun related items available in this part. the third part is other home appliances. many home related appliances available in this part. the last part is computer, printer, xerox machine and many more electronic machine available in this last part. middle part of exhibition is information center. any electronic items related information available in this middel part. that this exhibition is different for other exhibition.
Exhibition plays an
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verius
kind of product.
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there
was
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lot of
exhibition
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in my city.
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but
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i
would like and talk about m. k. exhibition. m. k. exhibition
was run
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electro
market.
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there
was
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gate on entrance.
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gate
right side parking facility
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.
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this
exhibition
was divided
in 4
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part
.
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the
first
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part
is routine
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electronic
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items
.
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fridge
, air condition, washing machine, microwave and
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many
more routine
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electronic
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items
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available
in this
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part
.
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the
second
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part
was fun
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related
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items
.
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television
, digital video player, sound system, home theater and
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many
more fun
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related
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items
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available
in this
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part
.
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the
third
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part
is other home appliances.
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many
home
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related
appliances
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in this
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part
.
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the
last
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part
is computer, printer, xerox machine and
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more
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electronic
machine
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in this last
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part
.
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middle
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part
of exhibition is information center.
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any
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electronic
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items
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related
information
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available
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middel
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that
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for other exhibition.
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IELTS essay you have visited exhibition

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
165 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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