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The provide linear representation reveals the information about the national recycling rates from 1960 to 2011.

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In an overview, which total waste recovery was steadily increase but after sometime show the peak point while bt he percent of recycling show the increasing trend in the initial year but after some year sharply increase and reach near to peak point. Looking at the details, In 1960, which waste recovery was 5. 6 million tons. In one decade, It was increase slightly with 9. 3 but after that next one decade which was waste recovery it reach 16. 7 million tons. In 1985, the total waste recovery was increase quickly and end of the year reach to the peak point. It was 66. 9. In 1960, the precent of recycling high as compare to total waste recovery with 6. 4%. Next one decade, the percent recycling increase slowly. It was 7. 3%. In 1975 to 1985 increase gradually with 10. 11%. In 1985, percent recycling touch the peak point of the end of year.
In an overview, which total
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peak
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point
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recycling
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the increasing trend in the initial
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year
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but
after
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some
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year
sharply
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increase
and reach near to
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peak
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point
. Looking at the
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details
, In 1960, which
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waste
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recovery
was 5. 6 million tons. In one decade, It was
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one decade which was
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16. 7 million tons. In 1985, the total
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. It was 66. 9. In 1960, the
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recycling
high as compare to total
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waste
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recovery
with 6. 4%.
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one decade, the percent
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recycling
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increase
slowly
. It was 7. 3%. In 1975 to 1985
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increase
gradually
with 10. 11%. In 1985, percent
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IELTS essay The provide linear representation reveals the information about the national recycling rates from 1960 to 2011.

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