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the protect of the environment

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Nowadays, more and more people worries about the environment. In the last few decades humans have been polluting way to much which has had a negative effect on the environment. For this reason we most protect it now on. First we ought to start paying attention reuse and recycle. By doing so we will reduce quantity of rubbish we will not throw away so many things and we will be able to recycle most our waste. Second, a very good idea is to stop using cars so much and start cycling or walking a little more. For example, instead of commuting by car we can try to do it on foot or by bike. Finally, if we really want to change things we will teach young pupils about the dangers of contamination and pollution. It’s the only way to change the future because they are the future citizens of the world. In conclusion, I believe that if we do these three things, we can still prevent humans from destroying the environment.
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about the environment. In the last few decades humans have been polluting way
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much which has had a
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we most
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quantity of rubbish we will not throw away
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cycling or walking a
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things we will teach young pupils about the
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they are the future citizens of the world.

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humans from destroying the environment.
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IELTS essay the protect of the environment

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
171 words
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