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With extreme pride and pleasure, we would like to announce that - the Gujarat Council on Science and Technology has conferred a Super Computer to Marwadi University. With this, Marwadi University has become the only university in Gujarat to be granted a Super Computer facility alongside Computer Engineering in AI, Big Data and ICT courses. A special mention to Mr. Jeet Marwadi, Dr. R. B. Jadeja and team for making a solid proposal to the Gujarat Council on Science and Technology. The future is here at Marwadi University!
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IELTS essay Super ComputerSuper ComputerSuper ComputerSuper Computer

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3 paragraphs
88 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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