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The Pros And Cons Of Working In A Call Center

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Whether one is taking care of customer complaints or giving customer support, one will have to deal with people. Some of these people are sometimes very rude and its very difficult to deal with that especially when you are trying to help. The job is mostly repetitive and can get to be a drudgery. There are only finite possibilities and the call center timings which oppose the normal circadian rhythm make it difficult for the call centre executives to rest and they end up suffering from insomnia. They begin to binge to keep themselves awake at odd hours and end up being obese. The call centers have provided work opportunities to thousands of kids in developing countries who might have been unemployed otherwise. An empty mind is the devil’s workshop hence a job in the call center with its pros and cons is better than being unemployed.
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IELTS essay The Pros And Cons Of Working In A Call Center

Essay
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2 paragraphs
147 words
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