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Burns fossil cars should be stooped to use and people need to be encouraged to use electronic cars. Do you agree with the statement?

Burns fossil cars should be stooped to use and people need to be encouraged to use electronic cars. m3Xr8
Burns fossil cars ought to be banned all Moreover use electronic cars instead of that. I firmly agree with this statement. Burns fossil cars are harmful for our environment and it is also reason of humans disease. Burns fossil cars make filthy our environment and occur air population. When It moves on road that time it exhibits harmful washes. Sometimes it need to be repaired during it is running, and things have changed. then many of repairman drop its unnecessary things on the street because they guess they Will not be able to sell this instruments further. Bangladesh government start thinking to ban fossil cars. Its exhibits washes many of reasons of humans diseases. People need oxygen to live. this types of fossil cars safety system is too weak than other cars. It's directly spread watches in outside. that's why pedestrians take this inside their body and suffer from disease. A recent experiment says, this types of cars are dangerous for pedestrians. When they take oxygen from the wind. fossil cars washes also come to humans with the oxygen. Many countries already banned this cars in order to harmfulness. To conclude, Environment is being badly effected by this car and also its exhibits watches mixed up with oxygen and being made feeble humans being.
Burns
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fossil
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cars
ought to
be banned
all
Moreover
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use
electronic
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cars
instead
of that. I
firmly
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agree
with this statement. Burns
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fossil
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cars
are harmful for our environment and it is
also
reason of
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humans
disease.

Burns
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fossil
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cars
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make
filthy our environment and occur air population.
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When
It
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moves
on road that time it exhibits harmful washes.
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Sometimes
it
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need
to
be repaired
during it is running, and things have
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changed
.
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then
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many
of repairman drop its unnecessary things on the street
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because
they guess they Will not be able to sell this instruments
further
. Bangladesh
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government
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start
thinking to ban
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fossil
cars.

Its exhibits
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washes
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of reasons of
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humans
diseases.
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People
need oxygen to
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live
.
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this
types of
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fossil
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cars
safety system is too
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weak
than other
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cars
. It's
directly
spread
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watches
in outside.
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that
's why pedestrians take this inside their body and suffer from disease. A recent experiment says, this types of
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cars
are
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dangerous
for pedestrians.
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When
they take oxygen from the wind.
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fossil
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cars
washes
also
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come
to
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humans
with the oxygen.

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Many
countries already banned
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this
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cars
in order to harmfulness.

To conclude
, Environment is being
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badly effected
by this
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car
and
also
its exhibits
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watches
mixed up with oxygen and
being made
feeble
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humans
being.
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IELTS essay Burns fossil cars should be stooped to use and people need to be encouraged to use electronic cars.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
214 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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