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Write an essay about one of your favourite landscapes (250-300 words). Your essay should include four main ideas: Cultural value. Natural beauty. Geological value. Preservation of heritage.

Write an essay about one of your favourite landscapes (250-300 words). Your essay should include four main ideas: Cultural value. Natural beauty. Geological value. Preservation of heritage. Vwy23
With approximately 1000 architectural treasures, Hoi An Ancient Town in Quang Nam Province is one of UNESCO Heritage Sites. Hoi An has been a must-visit holiday destination and it is internationally acclaimed for its cultural value, natural beauty, geological value as well as preservation of heritage. First and foremost, the cultural significance of Hoi An ancient town lies in its cultural worth. In company with the ups and downs of the history, Hoi An ancient town still keeps the characteristics of ancient and mossy style in each tile roof. Walking through peaceful streets, tourists do have opportunities not only to sample cuisines but also to discover the craft of making lanterns. Secondly, nature has endowed Hoi An with many beautiful spots that are closely connected with the natural landscape of the region's rivers and ocean. Going by small boat through the Bay Mau coconuts ranges is like entering another world. Hoi An people enjoy leaving their cares behind and will spend a few hours relaxing amongst the mangroves and swamps. Thirdly, owing to its favourable geographic location, Hoi An has the huge potential to develop foreign trade. The propitious location of the river with many beneficial factors such as natural resources, tranquil atmosphere, and the harmony of people and nature helped Hoi An become a trading port that revived and flourished. Hoi An became a crowded South East Asian trading port with the participation of traders from China, Japan, England and so on. Finally, it is such an obvious fact that the more precious Hoi An ancient town is, the more vulnerable it can be. Had it not been for the fact that tourists have the smallest unconscious action and behaviour, Hoi An would not have come to harm as well as lost its true character; therefore, serious preservative strategies have been established to conserve the significant values of the town. Hoi An has been preserved and promoted through various solutions, especially preventing serious degradation of heritage. It is an amazing wonder to see in person and visitors can have a whale of a time visiting Hoi An. Should people get away from it all so as to head for Hoi An, they will find out its specialties that mask the unique beauty of Hoi An.
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Ancient
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Town
in
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Quang
Nam Province is one of UNESCO Heritage Sites.
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has been a
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must
-visit holiday destination and it is
internationally
acclaimed for its cultural value, natural beauty, geological value
as well
as preservation of heritage.

First
and foremost, the cultural significance of
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Hoi
An
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ancient
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town
lies in its cultural worth. In
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company
with the ups and downs of the history,
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Hoi
An
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ancient
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town
still
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keeps
the characteristics of
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ancient
and mossy style in each tile roof. Walking through peaceful streets, tourists do have opportunities not
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only
to sample cuisines
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but
also
to discover the craft of making lanterns.

Secondly
, nature has endowed
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An with
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many
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beautiful
spots that are
closely
connected with the natural landscape of the region's rivers and ocean. Going by
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small
boat through the Bay
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Mau
coconuts ranges is like entering another world.
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Hoi
An
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people
enjoy leaving their cares behind and will spend a few hours relaxing amongst the mangroves and swamps.

Thirdly
, owing to its
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favourable
geographic location,
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Hoi
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An
has the huge potential to develop foreign trade. The propitious location of the river with
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many
beneficial factors such as natural resources, tranquil atmosphere, and the harmony of
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people
and nature
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helped
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Hoi
An become a trading port that revived and flourished.
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Hoi
An became a crowded South East Asian trading port with the participation of traders from China, Japan, England and
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so
on.

Finally
, it is such an obvious fact that the more precious
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Hoi
An
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ancient
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town
is, the more vulnerable it can be. Had it not been for the fact that tourists have the smallest unconscious action and
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behaviour
,
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Hoi
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An
would not have
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come
to harm
as well
as lost its true character;
therefore
, serious preservative strategies have
been established
to conserve the significant values of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
.
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Hoi
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An
has
been preserved
and promoted through various solutions,
especially
preventing serious degradation of heritage.

It is an amazing wonder to
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see
in person and visitors can have a whale of a time visiting
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Hoi
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Should
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people
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get
away from it all
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so as to
head for
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they will find out its specialties that mask the unique beauty of
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IELTS essay Write an essay about one of your favourite landscapes (250-300 words). Your essay should include four main ideas: Cultural value. Natural beauty. Geological value. Preservation of heritage.

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