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Most children feel frustrated and overwhelmed to share personal stories with their parents- who compassionately bring them up

Most children feel frustrated and overwhelmed to share personal stories with their parents- who compassionately bring them up kWx3O
Most children feel frustrated and overwhelmed to share personal stories with their parents- who compassionately bring them up. It takes the invisible gap between family members far more seriously and this essay will discuss the cause and give some recommendations. This problem first starts with the lack of understanding each other’s feelings and thoughts. Both sides, which are the elderly and the youngsters, often value one’s problems or opinions offensively. Otherwise, they have a tendency to not acknowledge others' situations. A practical example is a child in one’s family is trying to persuade their parents to become a singer. Regardless of understanding or letting the child explain, parents get angry and scold them heavily. However, misunderstanding between family members can lead to a barrier, and it is inevitable to say they will lose their connection. On the other hand, there are several ways to strengthen families in a greater bond. Firstly, knowing the situation one was born in is an essential key to have connected in every conversation. For instance, genZ, who were born from 2000 and later, are living in a booming of social apps and easily get lost. In contrast, their parents, who are genY, were able to suffer with the competitive lives due to the beginning of technology and difficult chances to chase their dreams. Moreover, having intimate conversations is important to remove the generation gap. Once family members open with other’s feelings, they will have a better connection and thoroughly accept others' character. To sum up, the lack of understanding is the main cause of the generation gap, in contrast, it is easily solved with better knowledge about other generations and intimate conversations.
Most children feel frustrated and overwhelmed to share personal stories with their
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parents-
who
compassionately
bring them up. It takes the invisible gap between
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family
members far more
seriously
and this essay will discuss the cause and give
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some
recommendations.

This problem
first
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starts
with the lack of understanding each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other’s
feelings and thoughts. Both sides, which are the elderly and the youngsters,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
value one’s problems or opinions
offensively
.
Otherwise
, they have a tendency to not acknowledge others' situations. A practical example is a child in one’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
is trying to persuade their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
to become a singer. Regardless of understanding or letting the child
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
,
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parents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
angry and scold them
heavily
.
However
, misunderstanding between
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
members can lead to a barrier, and it is inevitable to say they will lose their connection.

On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand, there are several ways to strengthen
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
in a greater bond.
Firstly
, knowing the situation one
was born
in is an essential key to have connected in every conversation.
For instance
,
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genZ
, who
were born
from 2000 and later, are living in a booming of social apps and
easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
lost.
In contrast
, their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
, who are
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genY
, were able to suffer with the competitive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
due to the beginning of technology and difficult chances to chase their dreams.
Moreover
, having intimate conversations is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to remove the generation gap. Once
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
members open with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other’s
feelings, they will have a better connection and
thoroughly
accept others' character.

To sum up, the lack of understanding is the main cause of the generation gap,
in contrast
, it is
easily
solved with better knowledge about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
generations and intimate conversations.
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IELTS essay Most children feel frustrated and overwhelmed to share personal stories with their parents- who compassionately bring them up

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  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
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